Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的习惯，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议避免重复表达，使用更地道的连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library in the morning because it has a coffee shop, which makes it convenient for me to enjoy a cup of coffee while reading.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且连接词使用不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并注意时态一致。

예시: In the morning, I usually read romantic books, but after classes, I prefer to review my lesson notes in the library.

제안: 时态使用不正确，且表达不够连贯。建议使用过去时态，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, when I was a child, I used to go to the library with my brother. However, we often played there instead of reading books, which was not very polite.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点，使表达更清楚。

예시: It depends on the city. In my hometown, not many children go to the library because mobile phones are more interesting. However, in Shanghai, more children prefer reading books in the library.

× Yes, when I was a child I go to the library and I play with my brother in library.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I went to the library and I played with my brother in the library.

这里描述的是过去的事情，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态，时态不一致。建议将动词go和play改为过去式went和played。

× I play with my brother in library.

✓ I play with my brother in the library.

在英语中，表示特定地点时，通常需要使用定冠词the。这里的library是特指的图书馆，应该加上the。

× It depends on which city you have lived.

✓ It depends on which city you have lived in.

动词live后面需要介词in来表示居住的地点，原句缺少介词in，导致表达不完整。

× they sold mobile phone is more intriguing,

✓ they sold mobile phones are more intriguing,

mobile phone应使用复数形式mobile phones，因为这里指的是一般的手机产品。动词sold应改为are，表示现在时态。

× they sold mobile phone is more intriguing,

✓ mobile phones are more intriguing,

这里描述的是现在的情况，应该使用现在时态。原句中使用了过去式sold，时态错误。

× if I go to library after I have some lessons,

✓ if I go to the library after I have some lessons,

go to后面表示特定地点时，library前应加定冠词the。

× I will prefer to look at the notes when I when I have these lessons.

✓ I prefer to look at the notes when I have these lessons.

prefer是表示习惯或偏好的动词，不常与will连用。这里表达的是习惯动作，使用一般现在时更合适。

× Often go to the library.

✓ They often go to the library.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应补充主语they，使句子完整。