Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. For example, say "I prefer reading books at home" instead of "I prefer to reading the books in home." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating "the book" unnecessarily.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home. I feel more comfortable and confident when I read in my own space.

제안: Provide a more complete and natural answer with supporting details. Instead of short, fragmented sentences, combine ideas and add specifics about what you read or why.

예시: Usually, I read books or study quietly in the library because it is a peaceful environment that helps me focus.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a reason or additional detail to enrich the response.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one near my home.

제안: Avoid uncertainty and unclear phrasing. Try to give a confident opinion with reasons or examples, and use correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools encourage reading and libraries are accessible in many cities.

× No, I don't because I prefer to reading the books in home.

✓ No, I don't because I prefer to read the books at home.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the base form 'to read' rather than the gerund 'reading'. Also, the correct preposition is 'at home' instead of 'in home'.

× No, I don't because I prefer to reading the books in home.

✓ No, I don't because I prefer to read the books at home.

The phrase 'in home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to being at one's home.

× I feel better and more confident when I read the book.

✓ I feel better and more confident when I read books.

The phrase 'the book' implies a specific book, but the context suggests a general statement about reading books, so the plural 'books' is appropriate.

× Read. I am reading the book.

✓ I usually read books. I am reading a book now.

The original response 'Read.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I usually read books.' makes it a complete sentence. Also, 'I am reading the book.' should specify 'a book' unless a specific book is known.

× I think yes, but I thought can be confident in this question.

✓ I think yes, but I am not confident about this question.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I thought can be confident' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not confident' to express uncertainty.