Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule. Also, I prefer studying at home since the library is not really my type of place.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words. Provide specific details about what you do and why.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually read comic books because they are interesting. They help me improve my critical thinking and understand different perspectives based on my experiences.

제안: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar mistakes for clarity.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because my school had a library. It was easy to access, and I enjoyed reading books with my friends. We had fun spending time together there.

제안: Answer more directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Provide specific examples or reasons.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library. For example, my Chinese relative says it helps him understand his lessons better because he can spend more time reading books related to his studies.

× I think go to the library is good, but I barely go there because I don't really.

✓ I think going to the library is good, but I barely go there because I don't really.

The phrase 'go to the library' needs to be in the gerund form 'going to the library' to function as the subject of the sentence. This is a common error where the verb is used instead of the gerund form after 'think'. Suggestion: Use the gerund form after verbs like 'think' when referring to activities.

× maybe library is not my type.

✓ maybe the library is not my type.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns when referring to a specific item is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'the' before singular countable nouns when referring to a specific object or place.

× the last time I went to library I, I like to read some type of comic books

✓ the last time I went to the library, I liked to read some types of comic books

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame 'the last time'. 'Some type of comic books' should be pluralized to 'some types of comic books' to agree with plural 'comic books'. Suggestion: Use 'the' before specific places, match verb tense with time reference, and ensure quantifiers agree in number.

× I like to read some type of comic books because I found it quite interesting to read

✓ I liked to read some types of comic books because I found them quite interesting to read

The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'comic books'. Suggestion: Maintain consistent verb tense and use correct pronouns matching the number of the noun.

× and and it can evaluate more more of my critical thinking and perspective on the story based on what I have experienced and.

✓ and it can develop more of my critical thinking and perspective on the story based on what I have experienced.

The verb 'evaluate' is incorrectly used; 'develop' fits better in this context. Also, repeated words 'more more' should be corrected to a single 'more'. Suggestion: Choose verbs that correctly express the intended meaning and avoid repeated words.

× I used to go library when I was a kid because it's OK in my school

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a kid because it was OK in my school

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'it's' should be 'it was' to match past tense. Suggestion: Use 'go to the' before places and maintain consistent tense.

× I used to go library when I was a kid

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a kid

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Suggestion: Always use 'go to' before a place name.

× it's OK in my school, so it's not hard for me to find a library.

✓ it was OK in my school, so it was not hard for me to find a library.

The tense should be past 'was' to match 'when I was a kid'. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent with the time frame.

× I usually spend time with my friends to read books and I find it interesting.

✓ I usually spent time with my friends reading books and I found it interesting.

The verb tense should be past 'spent' and 'found' to match past time frame. Also, 'to read books' is better expressed as 'reading books' to indicate the activity. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for past events and gerund form to express ongoing activities.

× For me, it's really have fun when we can spend time together with my friends.

✓ For me, it was really fun when we could spend time together with my friends.

'It's really have fun' is incorrect; 'it was really fun' is correct. Also, 'can' should be 'could' to match past tense. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms and match modal verbs to tense.

× I also have a Chinese relative and as I know about him, he said that he found it good and really good for him

✓ I also have a Chinese relative and as far as I know about him, he said that he found it good and really beneficial for him

The phrase 'as I know about him' is awkward; 'as far as I know about him' is better. Also, 'really good for him' can be improved to 'really beneficial for him' for clarity. Suggestion: Use common expressions and precise adjectives for clarity.

× he can spend more time to understand more about, uh, the thing that have written in the book

✓ he can spend more time understanding more about, uh, the things that are written in the book

The phrase 'spend more time to understand' should be 'spend more time understanding' using gerund after 'spend time'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' and 'have written' should be 'are written' to match plural subject. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'spend time' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× or it's sometimes related to the lesson that he's studying.

✓ or it's sometimes related to the lessons that he's studying.

'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match the context of multiple studies. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to multiple items.