Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons with linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and use simpler, correct phrases.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy studying and reading books there. For example, I usually read new chapters of my textbooks and explore books about different languages, including communication skills. Additionally, I use the library to consult dictionaries when needed.

제안: Your answer is too short and vague. Try to provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words to make your answer more informative and natural.

예시: In the library, I usually read books and study new chapters related to my courses. For instance, I focus on subjects like science and language learning, which help me improve my knowledge.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is unclear. Try to use the past tense correctly and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I went to the library regularly when I was a kid. I often studied dictionaries, encyclopedias, and atlas books because I was curious about different topics and places.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Even if you are unsure, try to give a polite and relevant response with some reasoning or opinion.

예시: I'm not sure about the exact habits of Chinese kids, but I think some of them do go to the library to study and read. However, with the rise of digital devices, many might prefer using online resources instead.

× Yes, I would like to go to the library regularly for studying, for reading the books and the checking the another chapters of the books and read the new communication language or the other languages books.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to the library regularly for studying, for reading books, checking other chapters of the books, and reading new communication language or other language books.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the checking' and 'the another chapters' which are not proper forms. 'Checking' should not have 'the' before it, and 'another' should not be preceded by 'the'. Also, 'read' should be parallel with other gerunds like 'reading'. The correction removes unnecessary articles and aligns verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I would like to go to the library regularly for studying, for reading the books and the checking the another chapters of the books and read the new communication language or the other languages books.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to the library regularly for studying, for reading books, checking other chapters of the books, and reading new communication language or other language books.

The use of 'the' before 'books' and 'another chapters' is incorrect here because it implies specific books or chapters which are not specified. 'Another' should not be preceded by 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more general and grammatically correct.

× Also I have to go for library for dictionary.

✓ Also, I have to go to the library for the dictionary.

The phrase 'go for library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. Also, 'dictionary' is a specific item, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× Reading books and studying the new chapters of the life. That's it.

✓ I usually read books and study new chapters of life. That's it.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I usually' and changing 'studying the new chapters of the life' to 'study new chapters of life' forms a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× I go to library regularly in the when I was kid I was go for the studying about dictionary and encyclopedia and the Atlas books that's.

✓ I went to the library regularly when I was a kid. I used to study dictionaries, encyclopedias, and atlas books.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'go' and 'was go' for past events. The correct past tense forms are 'went' and 'used to study'. Also, articles and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× I go to library regularly in the when I was kid I was go for the studying about dictionary and encyclopedia and the Atlas books that's.

✓ I went to the library regularly when I was a kid. I used to study dictionaries, encyclopedias, and atlas books.

The phrase 'go to library' lacks the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the Atlas books' should be 'atlas books' without 'the' unless referring to specific atlases. Correcting articles improves grammatical accuracy.

× No, I don't know have any language any knowledge about this, so it's not my type of question.

✓ No, I don't have any knowledge about this language, so it's not my type of question.

The phrase 'I don't know have any language any knowledge' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't have any knowledge about this language'. This correction fixes pronoun and verb usage for clarity.