Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use the present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more natural by saying "I don't often go to the library because nowadays we have the Internet, so I can do everything on my iPhone."

예시: I don't often go to the library because nowadays we have the Internet, so I can do everything on my iPhone.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. For example, say "When I want to find a place to do my homework or projects, I always go to the library because it is quiet and suitable for studying." Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: When I want to find a place to do my homework or projects, I always go to the library because it is quiet and suitable for studying.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and correct expressions. For example, say "When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents encouraged me to love reading." Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents encouraged me to love reading.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and contains grammatical errors. Combine sentences and use correct grammar. For example, say "I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because there is a lot of competition in China, so almost every kid has to seek knowledge."

예시: I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because there is a lot of competition in China, so almost every kid has to seek knowledge.

× No, I didn't often go to the library because nowadays we have an Internet, we can do everything from our iPhone.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays we have the Internet, and we can do everything from our iPhone.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'didn't' when referring to a habitual action in the present. Since the question is about current habits, the present tense 'don't' should be used. Also, 'an Internet' is incorrect; 'the Internet' is the correct form as it is a unique entity. Additionally, a conjunction 'and' is needed to connect the two independent clauses.

× No, I didn't often go to the library because nowadays we have an Internet, we can do everything from our iPhone.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays we have the Internet, and we can do everything from our iPhone.

The phrase 'an Internet' is incorrect because 'Internet' is a unique noun and should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× No, I didn't often go to the library because nowadays we have an Internet, we can do everything from our iPhone.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays we have the Internet, and we can do everything from our iPhone.

The original sentence is a comma splice connecting two independent clauses with just a comma. Using 'and' properly connects the clauses and corrects the sentence structure.

× When I want to find some place for do homework or my project, I always go to the library because there is a quiet place and it is suitable for do.

✓ When I want to find some place to do homework or my project, I always go to the library because there is a quiet place and it is suitable for doing it.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before the verb 'do'. The correct form is 'to do' when expressing purpose. Also, 'suitable for do' is incorrect; it should be 'suitable for doing' followed by the object 'it' to clarify the action.

× When I want to find some place for do homework or my project, I always go to the library because there is a quiet place and it is suitable for do.

✓ When I want to find some place to do homework or my project, I always go to the library because there is a quiet place and it is suitable for doing it.

The phrase 'suitable for do' is incorrect because after 'suitable for' a gerund (-ing form) is required, so 'doing' is correct.

× When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents love me to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents loved me to the library.

The verb 'love' should be in the past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was a kid'.

× When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents love me to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents loved me to go to the library.

The phrase 'love me to the library' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'love me to go to the library' or 'encouraged me to go to the library' to indicate the intended meaning.

× When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents love me to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my parents loved me to go to the library.

The pronoun usage is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'to go' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I believe Chinese kids often go to the library. Because I'm in China, there are a lot of competition, so every kids, almost every kids have to find knowledge.

✓ I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm in China, there is a lot of competition, so every kid, almost every kid, has to find knowledge.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' as a fragment is incorrect; it should be connected to the previous sentence. Also, 'there are a lot of competition' is incorrect because 'competition' is uncountable and singular, so 'there is a lot of competition' is correct. 'Every kids' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by a singular noun 'kid'. The verb should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject.

× I believe Chinese kids often go to the library. Because I'm in China, there are a lot of competition, so every kids, almost every kids have to find knowledge.

✓ I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm in China, there is a lot of competition, so every kid, almost every kid, has to find knowledge.

'Competition' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so 'there is a lot of competition' is correct. 'Every kids' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'every kid' is correct.

× I believe Chinese kids often go to the library. Because I'm in China, there are a lot of competition, so every kids, almost every kids have to find knowledge.

✓ I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm in China, there is a lot of competition, so every kid, almost every kid, has to find knowledge.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'every kid'. It should be 'has' to match the singular subject.