Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng ký hiệu '*' không cần thiết và nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như "I go to the library about three times a month, and during study periods, I go five to ten times a month."

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library about three times a month, but during exam periods, I visit it five to ten times a month to study more intensively.

제안: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn, ví dụ như "I often read reference books, romantic novels, comics, and scientific novels because I find the library an amazing place to relax after a day's work."

예시: I usually read reference books, romantic novels, comics, and scientific novels because I find the library an amazing place to relax and refresh after a long day at work.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể thêm một câu giải thích để làm phong phú hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói thêm về việc bạn thích đọc sách hay không.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my parents were busy and didn't have time to take me to places like the mall or library. However, I enjoyed reading books at home.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách tự nhiên và lịch sự hơn, có thể đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân hoặc nói về sự khác biệt văn hóa một cách ngắn gọn. Tránh nói "I don't know" quá nhiều.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but generally, many children enjoy going to the library to read and study. Cultural habits may vary from place to place.

× Yes, I go to the library about 3 * a month, or in study times I go to it from 5 to 10 * a month.

✓ Yes, I go to the library about 3 times a month, or during study times I go to it from 5 to 10 times a month.

The word 'times' is missing after the numbers to indicate frequency. '3' and '5 to 10' need to be followed by the plural noun 'times' to be grammatically correct.

× I often read reference books, romantic novels, comics, scientific novels and also some another type of books and comics because I find it amazing place to refresh after a day working.

✓ I often read reference books, romantic novels, comics, scientific novels and also some other types of books and comics because I find it an amazing place to refresh after a day of working.

The phrase 'some another' is incorrect; it should be 'some other'. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' to match 'some other'. The phrase 'amazing place' needs the article 'an' before it. 'After a day working' should be 'after a day of working' to be grammatically correct.