Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often visit the library whenever I have free time because it helps me refresh my mind. For example, a few days ago, I was feeling exhausted from study pressure, so I went to the nearby library to relax and study in a quiet environment.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use proper articles and plural forms, and try to link your ideas logically. Avoid repeating 'tend to' multiple times.

예시: When I arrive at the library, I usually read books about history. As a science student, I believe that having knowledge of history is important to improve my overall understanding. Therefore, I often choose historical books that might benefit me in the future.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has many grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, try to connect your ideas with linking words for better coherence.

예시: Honestly, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house. Moreover, I was a shy child, and my parents did not allow me to go outside or play with friends. Therefore, I never had the chance to visit a library.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words and use clearer expressions. Try to give a more confident and structured response with linking words.

예시: I do not have much personal experience, but based on what I have read on the Internet, many Chinese children often visit libraries to improve their academic performance. This is because they believe that studying in the library can be beneficial for their future education.

× Yes, I always tend to visit library whenever I get free time.

✓ Yes, I always tend to visit the library whenever I get free time.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect. So, 'visit the library' is the correct form.

× This because I think it plays a vital role in refreshing my mind.

✓ This is because I think it plays a vital role in refreshing my mind.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'This'. Without the verb, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'is' completes the sentence structure.

× To illustrate, a few days ago I was feeling exhausted that to study pressure.

✓ To illustrate, a few days ago I was feeling exhausted due to study pressure.

The phrase 'exhausted that to study pressure' is incorrect. The correct preposition to express cause is 'due to'. Also, the phrase should be 'due to study pressure' to make sense.

× Then I visit a library which is located near by my house.

✓ Then I visited a library which is located near my house.

First, 'nearby' is one word, not two. Second, since the action happened in the past ('a few days ago'), the verb should be in past tense 'visited'. Also, 'a library' is acceptable here as it is the first mention, but 'nearby' should be one word.

× Then I visit a library which is located near by my house.

✓ Then I visited a library which is located near my house.

The action happened in the past, so the verb 'visit' should be in past tense 'visited'.

× After arriving the library, I tend to read some book about history.

✓ After arriving at the library, I tend to read some books about history.

The phrase 'arriving the library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' after 'arriving'. Also, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' because 'some' is used with plural nouns.

× After arriving the library, I tend to read some book about history.

✓ After arriving at the library, I tend to read some books about history.

The verb 'arrive' is followed by the preposition 'at' when referring to a place. Omitting 'at' is incorrect.

× After arriving the library, I tend to read some book about history.

✓ After arriving at the library, I tend to read some books about history.

The quantifier 'some' is used with plural countable nouns, so 'book' should be plural 'books'.

× This is because as in science, as a science students, having some knowledge about history is essential to enhance my performance.

✓ This is because, as a science student, having some knowledge about history is essential to enhance my performance.

The phrase 'as a science students' is incorrect because 'students' is plural but 'a' is singular. It should be 'a science student'.

× This is because as in science, as a science students, having some knowledge about history is essential to enhance my performance.

✓ This is because, as a science student, having some knowledge about history is essential to enhance my performance.

The phrase 'as in science' is awkward and unnecessary here. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× So I always tend to read some historical books which can be beneficial for me in the future.

✓ So I always tend to read some historical books which can be beneficial to me in the future.

The phrase 'beneficial for me' is less common; 'beneficial to me' is more appropriate. However, the plural 'books' is correct here.

× Honestly, not this because there was not any library nearby my house.

✓ Honestly, not this because there was no library near my house.

The phrase 'not this' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'not this' replaced with 'not really' or omitted. Also, 'not any' is better expressed as 'no'. 'Nearby' should be 'near' in this context.

× Honestly, not this because there was not any library nearby my house.

✓ Honestly, not really because there was no library near my house.

Adding 'really' clarifies the negation. Also, 'nearby' is an adjective or adverb meaning 'close by' but here 'near' is the correct preposition.

× My mother and father do not let me go outside.

✓ My mother and father did not let me go outside.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verb should be in past tense 'did not let'.

× They not even let me go in the field to play with my friends.

✓ They did not even let me go to the field to play with my friends.

Again, past tense is required 'did not let'. Also, the preposition should be 'to the field' not 'in the field'.

× They not even let me go in the field to play with my friends.

✓ They did not even let me go to the field to play with my friends.

The correct preposition after 'go' when referring to a place is 'to', not 'in'.

× So no, I didn't go.

✓ So no, I didn't go.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× Actually, I have some lack of experiences about it, but from the from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

✓ Actually, I have little experience about it, but from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

The phrase 'some lack of experiences' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'little experience' (uncountable noun). Also, 'from the from the Internet' has a repeated phrase which should be corrected to 'from the Internet'.

× Actually, I have some lack of experiences about it, but from the from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

✓ Actually, I have little experience about it, but from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

The phrase 'lack of experiences about it' is awkward. 'Experience about it' is better. Also, 'from the Internet' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Actually, I have some lack of experiences about it, but from the from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

✓ Actually, I have little experience about it, but from the Internet, I have observed that numerous Chinese people tend to visit there in order to enhance their academic performance.

The phrase 'tend to visit there' is awkward. Usually, 'visit' is followed by the place name without 'there'. However, since the place is not specified, 'visit there' is acceptable but could be improved by specifying the place.

× This because they might consider that it can be advantageous for the upcoming years.

✓ This is because they might consider that it can be advantageous for the upcoming years.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'This'. Adding 'is' completes the sentence structure.