Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I do not often go" and "I only go" in the same sentence. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as "on online" should be "online" and "when also when" is repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't often go to the library, only when I can't find a book online. Usually, I buy books online, but sometimes I visit the library with my friends during free time.

제안: Good direct answer with supporting details. However, improve grammar by saying "an interval" instead of "a interval". Also, use linking words to make the answer more coherent, for example, "because" or "so". Try to add a bit more specific detail about what you study or why you prefer the library.

예시: I usually study in the library because my university has a very big one. Whenever I have an interval between classes, I go there to study for one or two hours, especially focusing on my major subjects.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammar errors and redundancy. For example, "go library" should be "go to the library" and "in home at home" is repetitive. Also, avoid ending with "and all"; instead, list examples clearly. Use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I did not like going to the library as a kid because I had many interesting things to do at home, such as watching cartoons on TV, reading picture books, and drawing or painting.

제안: Your answer is honest but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, "they are very hard working and studies" should be "they are very hardworking and study hard". Also, avoid repeating "I think" twice. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly to connect ideas.

예시: I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very hardworking and study hard.

× I only go to the library when I can't find a specific book on online.

✓ I only go to the library when I can't find a specific book online.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'online'. 'Online' functions as an adverb here, so 'on online' is incorrect. The correct form is simply 'online'.

× But if I find it online I just buy from there.

✓ But if I find it online, I just buy it from there.

The verb 'buy' requires an object, so 'it' should be included after 'buy'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I also go to the library in my free time when also when my friends are free.

✓ I also go to the library in my free time, especially when my friends are free.

The phrase 'when also when' is redundant and incorrect. Replacing it with 'especially when' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My university has a very big library and whenever I have a interval in my classes, I just go there and study for one or two hours.

✓ My university has a very big library and whenever I have an interval in my classes, I just go there and study for one or two hours.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'interval'.

× No, when I was a kid I did not like to go library at all because I have many interesting things to do in home at home, like watching cartoons on TV, reading picture books and drawing, painting and all.

✓ No, when I was a kid I did not like to go to the library at all because I had many interesting things to do at home, like watching cartoons on TV, reading picture books, and drawing, painting, and all.

The preposition 'to' is needed before 'the library'. Also, 'have' should be 'had' to match past tense. The phrase 'in home at home' is incorrect; 'at home' is correct. Commas are added for clarity in the list.

× No, when I was a kid I did not like to go library at all because I have many interesting things to do in home at home, like watching cartoons on TV, reading picture books and drawing, painting and all.

✓ No, when I was a kid I did not like to go to the library at all because I had many interesting things to do at home, like watching cartoons on TV, reading picture books, and drawing, painting, and all.

The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to agree with the past time frame 'when I was a kid'.

× I am actually not aware of this fact, but I think they go to the libraries because they are very hard working and studies as I heard.

✓ I am actually not aware of this fact, but I think they go to the libraries because they are very hardworking and study, as I heard.

The adjective 'hard working' should be one word 'hardworking'. The verb 'studies' should be 'study' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, a comma is needed before 'as I heard'.