Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、'Li library'という表現は誤りで、'the library'とすべきです。また、内容がやや冗長で、簡潔に答えることが望ましいです。例えば、'I usually study at home, so I don't go to the library often.'のようにまとめると良いでしょう。

예시: I usually study at home, so I don't go to the library often.

제안: 回答は内容が明確で、理由も述べられていますが、'quiet and calm place'の前に冠詞が抜けています。また、'so'の前にコンマを入れるとより自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

예시: When I go to the library, I usually borrow books or study there because it is a very quiet and calm place, so I can concentrate well.

제안: 回答は内容が具体的で良いですが、'so much'の使い方がやや不自然です。'often'や'frequently'の方が適切です。また、'And yeah'は口語的すぎるため、フォーマルな表現に変えると良いでしょう。

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library often, but in high school, I went there every week with my friends because we needed to study hard. It was also near my house.

제안: 文法的な誤りが多いです。'I have not been to China never'は二重否定で誤りです。'children'の重複も誤りです。より自然な表現に直し、推測を表す表現を使うと良いでしょう。

예시: I don't know for sure because I have never been to China, but I imagine that Chinese children often go to the library.

× I usually study at home and also I don't borrow books from Li library often.

✓ I usually study at home and also I don't borrow books from the library often.

The word 'Li library' seems to be a typo or incorrect name; it should be 'the library' to refer to a specific place. Also, 'library' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I think the library is a good place to study because it's very quiet and calm place so you can concentrate there.

✓ I think the library is a good place to study because it's a very quiet and calm place so you can concentrate there.

The phrase 'very quiet and calm place' needs an indefinite article 'a' before 'very' because it is a singular countable noun. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I imagine that the Chinese child children go to the library often.

✓ I imagine that Chinese children go to the library often.

The phrase 'child children' is redundant and incorrect. 'Children' is already the plural form of 'child', so 'child' should be removed.