Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'So we have free time' không rõ nghĩa và 'coffee' nên là 'a coffee shop'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác hoặc lặp lại.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I am in grade 12 and have a lot of homework. When I have free time, I prefer studying there or at a coffee shop because it's quiet and comfortable.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không đầy đủ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện. Hãy tránh nói những câu không hoàn chỉnh hoặc không liên quan.

예시: In the library, I usually read horror stories and other interesting books. Sometimes, I also study or do my homework there because it's a quiet place.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen đi thư viện khi còn nhỏ.

예시: When I was a kid, my parents took care of me and my sister a lot. We often went to a big library on weekends, where we enjoyed reading comics.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'take their key to the library' không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but I believe many Asian children value education and often visit libraries to improve their knowledge and skills.

× So we have free time, I'll go to the library or coffee to have space to do my homework and stuff.

✓ So when I have free time, I'll go to the library or a coffee shop to have space to do my homework and stuff.

The phrase 'we have free time' is incorrect because the subject is 'I' not 'we'. Also, 'coffee' should be 'a coffee shop' to indicate a place. The correction aligns the subject with the speaker and specifies the location properly.

× Well, horrible horror stories and books that.

✓ Well, I usually read horrible horror stories and books like that.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and subject. Adding 'I usually read' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× When I'm a kid my mom and my dad was very care killed me and my sister and we often go to the big library in the weekend and as we are a kid we always reading comic down there so I will.

✓ When I was a kid, my mom and dad were very caring. They took care of me and my sister, and we often went to the big library on weekends. As kids, we always read comics there.

The original sentence has multiple tense errors: 'I'm' should be 'I was' for past tense; 'was' should be 'were' to agree with plural subject; 'care killed me' is incorrect and should be 'were very caring' or 'took care of me'; 'go' should be 'went' for past tense; 'reading' should be 'read' in past tense; 'in the weekend' should be 'on weekends'. The correction fixes these tense and agreement errors and clarifies the meaning.

× Arab Vietnamese, in person. I don't know much about Chinese people, but I think that Asian people will care about knowledge and will care about self development, so they will often take their key to the library.

✓ I'm not sure about Chinese people personally. I don't know much about them, but I think that Asian people care about knowledge and self-development, so they often take their kids to the library.

The phrase 'Arab Vietnamese, in person' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Take their key to the library' should be 'take their kids to the library'. The correction clarifies the pronouns and intended meaning.