Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'on the weekend' thay vì 'as the weekend', và 'reading books' thay vì 'reading book'. Hãy tránh lặp từ và làm câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends to study and read books.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi số nhiều và ngữ pháp như 'reading books' và 'doing my homework'.

예시: I usually read books, do my homework, and study online when I am at the library.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, ví dụ 'went' thay vì 'go'. Câu thứ hai nên được diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và đúng ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'My parents hoped I could read many books to help with my studies at school.'

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I went to the library with my parents. They hoped I could read many books to help with my studies at school.

제안: Câu trả lời cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và đúng ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'every kid needs knowledge' và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp.

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because every kid needs knowledge, so going to the library is a good choice.

× Yes, I always go to the library as the weekend for study and reading book.

✓ Yes, I always go to the library on the weekend to study and read books.

The preposition 'as' is incorrect here; 'on the weekend' is the correct phrase to indicate time. Also, 'for study and reading book' is incorrect; it should be 'to study and read books' to express purpose and plural form for 'books'.

× I'm reading book, do my homework and study online in the library.

✓ I read books, do my homework, and study online in the library.

The phrase 'I'm reading book' is incorrect because 'book' should be plural 'books' and the present continuous tense is not appropriate here for habitual actions. Using simple present tense 'I read books' fits better.

× Yes, when I was a kid I go to the library with my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to the library with my parents.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'.

× My parents hope me can raise many book for the study at school.

✓ My parents hope I can borrow many books for studying at school.

'Hope me can' is incorrect; it should be 'hope I can'. Also, 'raise many book' is incorrect; 'borrow many books' is more appropriate. 'For the study at school' should be 'for studying at school'.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because every kids. Needs knowledge very much, so go to the library is good choice.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because every kid needs knowledge very much, so going to the library is a good choice.

'Every kids' is incorrect; 'every kid' is singular. 'Needs' should agree with singular 'every kid'. 'Go to the library is good choice' should be 'going to the library is a good choice' with the article 'a' before 'good choice'.