Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر وضوحًا ودقة، وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية، واستخدم تراكيب لغوية أكثر طبيعية. كما يجب أن تشرح أفكارك بشكل أفضل وتجنب العبارات غير المفهومة مثل "make me shout".

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to read philosophical books because I believe they help improve my communication skills and boost my confidence.

제안: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر طبيعية وصحيحة، وكن أكثر تحديدًا في شرح كيف تساعدك هذه الكتب. استخدم روابط بين الجمل لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا.

예시: I usually read books about history and philosophy because they help me improve my communication skills, which makes me feel proud of myself.

제안: انتبه إلى قواعد اللغة مثل استخدام الفعل الصحيح مع الضمائر، وحاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً. استخدم جمل مترابطة لتوضيح أفكارك.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but I used to read short stories because I couldn't read long books. Now, I often visit the library to read many books.

제안: تجنب استخدام عبارات غير واضحة أو غير مناسبة مثل "I am rocking". حاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر تنظيماً واستخدم كلمات مناسبة للسياق. استخدم جمل مترابطة لتوضيح أفكارك.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library. I didn't have that opportunity when I was young, so I hope my children will have the chance to read many books.

× I often go to the library to read a lot of philosophic books 'cause I think books benefits my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

✓ I often go to the library to read a lot of philosophical books because I think books benefit my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

The word 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'benefit' instead of 'benefits' to agree in number. Also, 'philosophic' is better replaced with 'philosophical' as the correct adjective form.

× I often go to the library to read a lot of philosophic books 'cause I think books benefits my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

✓ I often go to the library to read a lot of philosophical books because I think books benefit my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

The informal contraction ''cause' should be replaced with the full conjunction 'because' for clarity and correctness in formal speech.

× I think books benefits my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

✓ I think books benefit my ability to talk with people and make me shout.

The phrase 'make me shout' is awkward and unclear. It would be better to clarify the intended meaning or rephrase for clarity.

× I usually read a lot of books, something about history, philosophic books, because I think those subjects improve my communique, improve me to communicate with people and make me proud of myself.

✓ I usually read a lot of books, something about history and philosophical books, because I think those subjects improve my communication, help me communicate with people, and make me proud of myself.

'Philosophic' should be 'philosophical'. 'Communique' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'communication'. The phrase 'improve me to communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'help me communicate'. Also, the list should be connected properly with 'and'.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I were a kid, but sometimes when I when I were a kid, I read short stories because I don't have the ability to read a lot of books, huge books.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but sometimes when I was a kid, I read short stories because I didn't have the ability to read a lot of books, big books.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. Also, 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Huge books' is better expressed as 'big books'.

× But now I always go to the library, reading a lot of books.

✓ But now I always go to the library and read a lot of books.

The phrase 'reading a lot of books' is a fragment here; it should be connected with 'and' to form a complete sentence.

× I'm not sure about that. Uh, I think they do, but the important thing that I am rocking and I didn't have the right chance.

✓ I'm not sure about that. Uh, I think they do, but the important thing is that I am lacking and I didn't have the right chance.

The phrase 'I am rocking' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'lacking'. Also, 'the important thing that' should be 'the important thing is that' to be grammatically correct.

× I wish in the future I can uh, make my children get the right chance. Read a lot of books when they are kids.

✓ I wish in the future I can make my children have the right chance to read a lot of books when they are kids.

The phrase 'make my children get' is awkward; 'make my children have' is better. Also, 'Read a lot of books when they are kids' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence.