Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "to to") và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như "because" hoặc "so that". Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library's reading room because it is quiet, which helps me avoid distractions so that I can focus on studying my economics course.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh (ví dụ: "Suggest books, documents and practice worksheets."). Bạn nên nối các câu lại với nhau bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "dim my understanding" nên là "improve my understanding" hoặc "deepen my understanding". Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lặp từ.

예시: In the library, I usually study alone by searching for and collecting useful materials such as books, documents, and practice worksheets, which help me deepen my understanding of economic concepts.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "I I don't like", "there there is", "just to reading"). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ ("didn't like" thay vì "don't like"). Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Actually, no. When I was a child, I didn't like going to the library because there were many more interesting activities to do than sitting for hours reading boring books.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: "do not offend go", "they they were engaging", "I, I, I I think that"). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn ("engaging in DVDs" không hợp lý, có thể nói "watching DVDs" hoặc "playing sports"). Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: In my opinion, most Chinese kids do not often go to the library. Instead, they prefer engaging in more stimulating activities such as playing football or watching DVDs.

× Yes, I usually go to the reading room because it's quiet and also help me to to avoid distractions so that I can study my economics course.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the reading room because it's quiet and also helps me to avoid distractions so that I can study my economics course.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'to to avoid' contains a repeated 'to', which should be corrected to a single 'to'.

× In the library, I usually study on my own, looking for and collecting materials that are useful for my economic course. Suggest books, documents and practice worksheets.

✓ In the library, I usually study on my own, looking for and collecting materials that are useful for my economics course, such as books, documents, and practice worksheets.

The sentence 'Suggest books, documents and practice worksheets.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. It should be integrated into the previous sentence with proper conjunctions. Also, 'economic course' should be 'economics course' for correct noun usage.

× These help me these help me to dim my my understanding about the economics concepts.

✓ These help me to deepen my understanding of the economics concepts.

The phrase 'dim my my understanding' is incorrect; 'dim' is not appropriate here. The correct verb is 'deepen'. Also, 'my my' is a repeated word and should be corrected. 'About' should be replaced with 'of' to correctly collocate with 'understanding'.

× Actually, no. When when I was a child, I I don't like to go to the library 'cause there there is a lot of activity that are more interesting than sitting for hours just to reading a boring book.

✓ Actually, no. When I was a child, I didn't like to go to the library because there were a lot of activities that were more interesting than sitting for hours just reading a boring book.

The sentence contains repeated words 'when when' and 'I I' which should be removed. 'Don't like' should be in past tense 'didn't like' to match the past time frame. 'There is' should be 'there were' for plural 'activities' in past tense. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. 'That are' should be 'that were' to agree with plural and past tense. 'Just to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'just reading'.

× In my point of view, majority of Chinese kids do not offend go to the library.

✓ In my point of view, the majority of Chinese kids do not often go to the library.

The phrase 'do not offend go' is incorrect; 'offend' should be 'often'. Also, 'majority' should be preceded by 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× Instead, they they were engaging in some DVDs that are more interesting and more stimulating, such as playing football or I, I, I I think that.

✓ Instead, they are engaging in some activities that are more interesting and more stimulating, such as playing football, or I think that.

The phrase 'they they' is repeated and should be corrected. 'Were engaging' suggests past continuous tense, but the context implies present tense, so 'are engaging' is appropriate. 'Some DVDs' is incorrect in this context; 'some activities' fits better. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or rephrased for clarity.