Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite short and somewhat repetitive. Try to provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a reason to make it more natural and effective. Avoid repeating the same phrase 'prefer to read' twice.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading at home where I feel more comfortable and relaxed.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I like' and use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, be careful with grammar, such as 'so to feel' which should be 'so that I feel'.

예시: Although I don't often visit the library, when I do, I usually find a quiet corner to read my favorite book. However, I prefer reading at home because I can take breaks whenever I want and feel more comfortable.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains a small repetition error ('one of is one of'). Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details about your experience to enrich your answer.

예시: When I was a kid, going to the library was very important because my parents always took me there. As a result, I developed a love for reading, which remains one of my favorite hobbies during my free time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I think' multiple times. Also, 'went to they go into library too much' is incorrect. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use proper grammar and linking words.

예시: Although I'm not Chinese, I believe that many Chinese children often visit libraries because education is highly valued in their culture.

× Not really, I always prefer to read. Prefer to read at home.

✓ Not really, I always prefer to read at home.

The second sentence 'Prefer to read at home.' is a sentence fragment because it lacks a subject. Combining it with the previous sentence or adding a subject makes it complete.

× I don't like going to library, but if it happens I I pick my favorite book to read.

✓ I don't like going to the library, but if it happens I pick my favorite book to read.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× if it happens I I pick my favorite book to read.

✓ if it happens, I pick my favorite book to read.

There is a repeated word 'I' and a missing comma after the conditional clause, which affects sentence clarity and structure.

× I like to take a lot of breaks during readings.

✓ I like to take a lot of breaks during reading.

The word 'reading' here is an uncountable noun referring to the activity, so it should not be pluralized as 'readings'.

× That's why I prefer reading at home so to feel more comfortable.

✓ That's why I prefer reading at home to feel more comfortable.

The phrase 'so to feel' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to feel' without 'so' in this context.

× Reading is one of is one of my favorite hobbies, which I always do in my spare time.

✓ Reading is one of my favorite hobbies, which I always do in my spare time.

The phrase 'is one of' is repeated unnecessarily, causing redundancy and disrupting sentence flow.

× I think they went to they go into library too much.

✓ I think they go to the library too much.

The phrase 'went to they go into library' is incorrect and confusing. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' here. The corrected sentence uses present tense to match the question and proper article usage.