Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "roughly" và nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Hãy thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ lý do bạn không thường xuyên đến thư viện.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule with work and study. Instead, I prefer studying at home or doing research online because it's more convenient for me.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "watch short video" nên là "watch short videos". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "in here" nên là "here". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually read books or watch short videos on TikTok in the library because it is quiet and private, which helps me concentrate better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự liên kết và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh dùng câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my mother didn't take me there. Therefore, I wasn't familiar with the library at that time.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "in Chinese" nên là "in China" và "bonus the knowledge" nên là "improve their knowledge". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because studying hard is very important in China. Therefore, the library plays a significant role in helping children improve their knowledge.

× Now I'll roughly go to the library because I have a very busy sector with work and study.

✓ Now I will rarely go to the library because I have a very busy schedule with work and study.

The modal verb 'I'll' (I will) is used incorrectly with 'roughly'. The intended meaning is 'rarely', which is an adverb of frequency, not a modal verb. Also, 'sector' is incorrect; the correct word is 'schedule'. The sentence should use 'will' for future intention and 'rarely' to express frequency.

× Besides, I usually prefer to study at home or use online research.

✓ Besides, I usually prefer to study at home or do online research.

The verb 'use' is incorrectly paired with 'online research'. The correct collocation is 'do online research' because 'research' is an activity, not an object to be used.

× I usually read a book or watch short video on Tiktok in the library because in here it's very quiet and private.

✓ I usually read a book or watch short videos on TikTok in the library because here it's very quiet and private.

'Video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'in here' is incorrect; 'here' alone is sufficient. 'TikTok' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.

× I usually read a book or watch short video on Tiktok in the library because in here it's very quiet and private.

✓ I usually read a book or watch short videos on TikTok in the library because it is very quiet and private here.

The phrase 'in here it's' is awkward; better to say 'it is very quiet and private here'. This corrects the prepositional phrase and sentence flow.

× Now, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my mother. Didn't go to the library, so I don't go here.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my mother didn't go there, so I didn't go either.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Because my mother.' is incomplete. The sentence should be combined properly with correct conjunctions and verb tenses to express the cause and effect clearly.

× Now, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my mother. Didn't go to the library, so I don't go here.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my mother didn't go there, so I didn't go either.

The phrase 'I don't go here' is present tense, inconsistent with the past context. It should be 'I didn't go either' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in Chinese they will study very hard.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in China they study very hard.

'In Chinese' is incorrect when referring to a place; the correct preposition is 'in China'. Also, 'will study' is unnecessary future tense; simple present 'study' is better for habitual actions.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in Chinese they will study very hard.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in China they study very hard.

The modal verb 'will' is unnecessary here because the sentence talks about habitual actions, which should be in the simple present tense.

× So library is very important, significant for the kid to bonus the knowledge.

✓ So the library is very important and significant for kids to increase their knowledge.

'Bonus' is incorrectly used as a verb; the correct verb is 'increase' or 'enhance'. Also, 'the kid' should be plural 'kids' to generalize, and 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. The conjunction 'and' connects adjectives properly.