Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, say 'I often go to the library because it is a quiet and beautiful place full of knowledge. I love reading many books there, which helps me learn new things.'

예시: I often go to the library because it is a quiet and beautiful place full of knowledge. I love reading many books there, which helps me learn new things.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to answer directly and clearly. Use simple sentences and linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect ideas. For example, say 'In the library, I usually read many books because it helps me gain knowledge and improve my life.' Avoid unnecessary words and focus on clear meaning.

예시: In the library, I usually read many books because it helps me gain knowledge and improve my life.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear and concise answer with a supporting detail. For example, say 'Yes, I did. When I was six years old, I often went to the library with my grandma to read books.' This shows your experience clearly and naturally.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was six years old, I often went to the library with my grandma to read books.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to answer the question directly and clearly. If you are unsure, you can say so politely and then give your opinion with reasons. For example, say 'I am not sure because I am Cambodian, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because education is very important in China.' Avoid unrelated or unclear statements.

예시: I am not sure because I am Cambodian, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because education is very important in China.

× I always go to the library because library is the place looks like a magic place.

✓ I always go to the library because the library is a place that looks like a magic place.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular place. Also, 'a' is used before 'magic place' because it is a singular countable noun being introduced for the first time.

× I always go to there because I love to learning and I also I love to reading so too much books.

✓ I always go there because I love learning and I also love reading so many books.

The preposition 'to' is not used before gerunds like 'learning' and 'reading' in this context. Also, 'too much books' is incorrect; 'too many books' or 'so many books' is correct for countable nouns.

× When we think about something do in a library, I have to way for many people do it one for go to buy a books 2GO to reading a books me also I'm going to reading a lot of the books for make me full of intelligent, full of knowledge for good experience for my life and make my life better.

✓ When we think about what to do in a library, I have to wait for many people to do it: one to go buy books, two to read books. I also read a lot of books to make myself full of intelligence and knowledge, to gain good experience for my life and make my life better.

Several preposition errors: 'way for' should be 'wait for'; 'go to buy a books' should be 'go buy books'; 'go to reading a books' should be 'read books'. Also, 'make me full of intelligent' should be 'make myself full of intelligence'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Well, I remember when I was six years old, I'm going to the library for reading a book with my grandma, and yes, my answer is yes I did.

✓ Well, I remember when I was six years old, I went to the library to read a book with my grandma, and yes, my answer is yes, I did.

The past tense 'went' is needed instead of 'I'm going' to match the past time frame. Also, 'to read' is the correct infinitive form after 'went'.

× I think maybe Chinese go to Chinese kids go to library because the Chinese is a top three ranked strong girl in around the planet and I and then I think it's the kids full of intelligent also.

✓ I think maybe Chinese kids go to the library because China is ranked among the top three strongest countries around the planet, and I think the kids are also full of intelligence.

Pronoun and noun usage errors: 'Chinese go to Chinese kids go' is incorrect; it should be 'Chinese kids go'. 'The Chinese is a top three ranked strong girl' is incorrect; it should be 'China is ranked among the top three strongest countries'. 'Kids full of intelligent' should be 'kids are full of intelligence'.