Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I love studying math and reading. I need a quiet place to focus, and the library provides that environment. Additionally, I want to improve my skills to achieve high grades at school.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper grammar and use linking words to explain your reasons. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

예시: I usually study English grammar and math in the library because I have the SAT test next year. I want to prepare well to get a high score, so I spend time reading and practicing these subjects there.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear expressions. Use past tense correctly and try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and provide specific details.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because I aspired to be a scientist. I used to prepare essays and learn new things there because I love gaining knowledge.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to gain knowledge and achieve high scores in school. This support helps them develop good study habits.

× I'm an ardent of math, I like study and reading and I need a quiet place when I study.

✓ I'm an ardent fan of math, I like studying and reading and I need a quiet place when I study.

The phrase 'ardent of math' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'ardent fan of math'. Also, 'like study and reading' should be 'like studying and reading' because 'like' is followed by gerunds when expressing preferences.

× So This is why I often go to library.

✓ So this is why I often go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× I want improve myself and get high school at my school.

✓ I want to improve myself and get high grades at my school.

The verb 'want' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to improve'). Also, 'get high school' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'get high grades'.

× I'm usually I'm usually study English grammar and math in the library because after one year I have SAT test I won't get a high score so that's why I usually reading and study the English grammar and the math.

✓ I'm usually studying English grammar and math in the library because in one year I will have the SAT test and I want to get a high score, so that's why I usually read and study English grammar and math.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect verb forms. 'I'm usually study' should be 'I'm usually studying'. 'After one year I have SAT test' should be 'in one year I will have the SAT test'. 'I won't get a high score' is likely intended as 'I want to get a high score'. 'Usually reading and study' should be 'usually read and study'.

× Yes I did umm I often go to a library when I were a kid because I aspire a scientist so I preparing the essay details when I were a kid.

✓ Yes I did. I often went to a library when I was a kid because I aspired to be a scientist, so I prepared essay details when I was a kid.

The past tense should be used consistently when talking about past events. 'Often go' should be 'often went', 'were' should be 'was' for singular subject 'I', 'aspire' should be 'aspired', and 'preparing' should be 'prepared'.

× I aspire a scientist so I preparing the essay details when I were a kid.

✓ I aspired to be a scientist, so I prepared essay details when I was a kid.

The verb 'aspire' is followed by 'to' plus a noun or verb, so 'aspire a scientist' should be 'aspire to be a scientist'. Also, 'preparing' should be 'prepared' to match past tense.

× Yeah, yes it does. The Chinese kid often go to the library because their parents helping them became a good man and get more knowledge and get high score in the school.

✓ Yeah, yes they do. Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents help them become good people, gain more knowledge, and get high scores in school.

'It does' is incorrect for plural subject; 'they do' is correct. 'The Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids'. 'Helping' should be 'help'. 'Became' should be 'become'. 'A good man' is too specific; 'good people' is more general and appropriate. 'Get high score' should be 'get high scores'. 'In the school' is better as 'in school'.