Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by adding articles and improving sentence flow. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, instead of 'I just like sitting in my cozy room and do some review of the materials,' say 'I prefer studying in my cozy room now.'

예시: I used to go to the library frequently when I was a medical student, but now that I am working, I prefer studying in my cozy room.

제안: Improve grammar by using consistent verb forms and add linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, use 'solve problems' instead of 'solving the problems' and connect ideas with 'so' or 'because'.

예시: I usually review my learning materials and solve problems with my friends, so if I get something wrong, I can ask them for an explanation.

제안: Use past tense consistently and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, avoid mixing tenses in one sentence. For example, say 'I did not have much time when I was a kid, so I went to the library more often during university.'

예시: I really loved libraries, but I did not have much time when I was a kid, so I went to the library more often during my university life.

제안: Avoid hesitation sounds like 'Uh' and improve grammar by using correct verb forms. Also, try to give a more direct and confident answer with linking words. For example, 'I haven't thought about that before because I'm from Thailand, but I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because university entrance is very competitive.'

예시: I haven't thought about that before since I'm from Thailand, but I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because university entrance exams are very competitive.

× I used to go to library frequently when I was still a medical student, but now as I am working, I just like sitting in my cozy room and do some review of the materials.

✓ I used to go to the library frequently when I was still a medical student, but now as I am working, I just like sitting in my cozy room and do some review of the materials.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I used to go to library frequently when I was still a medical student, but now as I am working, I just like sitting in my cozy room and do some review of the materials.

✓ I used to go to the library frequently when I was still a medical student, but now as I am working, I just like sitting in my cozy room and doing some review of the materials.

After the verb 'like' when expressing preference, the gerund form (-ing) of the verb should be used. Therefore, 'do' should be changed to 'doing' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually review my learning material and also solving the problems with my friends.

✓ I usually review my learning material and also solve the problems with my friends.

The verb 'also' connects two verbs in the same tense and form. Since 'review' is in base form after 'usually', 'solving' should be changed to 'solve' to maintain parallel structure.

× I really love libraries, but unfortunately when I was a kid I do not have that much time, so I would say I go to the library often in my university life.

✓ I really love libraries, but unfortunately when I was a kid I did not have that much time, so I would say I went to the library often in my university life.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in past tense. 'Do not have' should be 'did not have' and 'go' should be 'went' to match the past context.

× Uh, I haven't think about that before because I'm not Chinese, I'm from Thailand, but I bet they go to the library often because the competition for attending university in China is quite tense.

✓ Uh, I haven't thought about that before because I'm not Chinese, I'm from Thailand, but I bet they go to the library often because the competition for attending university in China is quite tense.

After 'haven't', the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Think' should be changed to 'thought' to be grammatically correct in the present perfect tense.