Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like 'work' twice and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I feel more comfortable reading books or working on my projects at home.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more coherent by using linking words and avoid hesitation. Also, clarify your ideas with specific examples.

예시: I usually go to the library to read books that require a lot of concentration because the quiet environment helps me focus better.

제안: Your answer is good but the last sentence is incomplete and unclear ('car atmosphere'). Make sure to finish your thoughts and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I used to go to the library regularly as a teenager because I was preparing for my university entrance exam. The quiet environment and being surrounded by books helped me concentrate and study more effectively.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, check subject-verb agreement ('This help' should be 'This helps') and try to use more varied vocabulary.

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because extended families can be noisy at home. Therefore, they prefer the quiet and peaceful environment of the library, which helps them concentrate better on their studies.

× I feel comfortable to read books or work on my project work at home.

✓ I feel comfortable reading books or working on my project work at home.

After expressions like 'feel comfortable', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive. Therefore, 'to read' and 'work' should be changed to 'reading' and 'working' respectively.

× I mean as there are some books that need to be read in a silent place like library and I don't really I can't read.

✓ I mean, there are some books that need to be read in a silent place like a library, and I really can't read them elsewhere.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding proper conjunctions and articles, and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× like library

✓ like a library

When referring to a singular countable noun in a general sense, the indefinite article 'a' should be used before 'library'.

× Being surrounded by books and a car atmosphere made the whole experience more productive and.

✓ Being surrounded by books and a calm atmosphere made the whole experience more productive.

The phrase 'a car atmosphere' seems to be a typo and incomplete sentence ending with 'and' is incorrect. Correcting 'car' to 'calm' and completing the sentence resolves the issue.

× in extended families there are usually many people at home

✓ in extended families there are usually many people at home

No article error here; the phrase is correct as is.

× This help them concentrate better on their reading and homework.

✓ This helps them concentrate better on their reading and homework.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.