Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'about love stories', you can say 'I enjoy reading various novels, especially dramatic love stories, which is why I visit the library often.'

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading books. In particular, I enjoy various novels, especially dramatic love stories. Therefore, I visit the library frequently to find new books to read.

제안: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'borrow books' without 'to'. For example, say 'I usually read newspapers and prepare for tests in the library because it provides a quiet environment. Additionally, I borrow and read various types of books there.'

예시: In the library, I usually read newspapers and prepare for my tests because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Moreover, I borrow different kinds of books to read during my free time.

제안: Use past tense consistently and improve clarity. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I used to go to the library as a kid because I enjoyed reading interesting stories. The newspapers had special pages for children, which I liked a lot.'

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child because I enjoyed reading various interesting stories. The newspapers had pages dedicated to kids' stories, and I liked reading them there.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing sentences. Use correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because their environment encourages creativity. Unlike urban areas, they have different opportunities to learn and explore.'

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often visit the library because their environment fosters creativity. Compared to urban areas, they have unique chances to learn and develop new skills there.

× I like different kinds of novel about love stories, about love stories, dramatic.

✓ I like different kinds of novels about love stories, especially dramatic ones.

The word 'novel' should be plural 'novels' because it refers to multiple kinds. Using the plural form correctly matches the quantifier 'different kinds of'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'kinds of'.

× And also that's the reason I go to the library many times.

✓ And also that's the reason I go to the library many times.

No correction needed here as 'many times' is correctly used with the verb 'go'. Suggestion: No change required.

× I read newspaper in the library and sometime I have to go for the test preparation because library environment is very convenient for test preparation and also you have to go in the library for borrow books and read various types of books.

✓ I read newspapers in the library and sometimes I have to go for test preparation because the library environment is very convenient for it. Also, you have to go to the library to borrow books and read various types of books.

'Newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' when referring to reading them generally. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Library environment' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Go in the library' should be 'go to the library'. 'For borrow books' should be 'to borrow books'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general references, correct adverbs of frequency, and proper prepositions with articles.

× Yes, I go to the library when I was a kid because I like to read different interesting stories and I read newspaper because newspaper one page also created for the kids stories and I read it and enjoy it a lot in the library.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I liked to read different interesting stories and I read newspapers because one page of the newspaper was also created for kids' stories and I read it and enjoyed it a lot in the library.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Like' should be 'liked' for past tense consistency. 'Newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers'. 'Newspaper one page also created' is incorrect; it should be 'one page of the newspaper was also created'. 'Enjoy' should be 'enjoyed' to maintain past tense. Suggestion: Maintain consistent past tense verbs when talking about past events and use correct sentence structure.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are creative mind than other peoples than other kids because their environment are very different to urban areas and their their causes such as a lot of creative mind and they also learn different.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they have a more creative mind than other people or other kids because their environment is very different from urban areas and their causes, such as having a lot of creative minds, and they also learn differently.

'Creative mind' should be 'a more creative mind' or 'more creative minds' depending on meaning. 'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Environment are' should be 'environment is' because 'environment' is singular. 'Different to' should be 'different from'. 'Learn different' should be 'learn differently' as an adverb is needed. Suggestion: Use correct singular/plural forms, proper prepositions, and adverbs for clarity.