Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it lacks a definite article before 'library' and could be more natural by adding linking words and slightly expanding the explanation without redundancy. Try to use 'the library' and add a linking phrase to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a peaceful and quiet place where I can concentrate on my lessons effectively.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete sentences. Use the definite article 'the library' and avoid repeating words. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually go to the library to study because when I stay at home, I cannot focus due to distractions like family conversations.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors such as missing articles and repeated words. Use 'the library' and complete your sentences. Also, try to provide more specific details and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I'm not sure, but I remember that when I was a child, I went to the library with my friends and borrowed some books that had many colorful pictures.

제안: Your answer is uncertain and lacks clarity. Avoid filler words like 'I'm' and incomplete thoughts. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and want to learn more about different sciences compared to other countries.

× Yes, I go to library most of the time because it is peaceful and quiet place to concentrate on my lessons.

✓ Yes, I go to the library most of the time because it is a peaceful and quiet place to concentrate on my lessons.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'peaceful and quiet place' needs the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun being introduced for the first time.

× I go to library for studying because when I when I stay at home and study, I cannot focus on my lessons.

✓ I go to the library for studying because when I stay at home and study, I cannot focus on my lessons.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the repeated phrase 'when I' is a redundancy and should be corrected.

× There are some distractions, some conversations between my family and.

✓ There are some distractions, such as conversations between my family members.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and'. It needs to be completed to convey the intended meaning clearly. Adding 'such as conversations between my family members' clarifies the distractions.

× I'm not sure but I remember when I was a kid a child I went to library with my friends and borrow some books from there.

✓ I'm not sure, but I remember when I was a kid, I went to the library with my friends and borrowed some books from there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'borrow' should be in past tense 'borrowed' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'a kid a child' is redundant; 'a kid' or 'a child' alone is sufficient.

× That books had various various of pictures and the.

✓ Those books had various pictures.

'That books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural and should be preceded by 'those' instead of 'that'. The repeated word 'various' is redundant and should appear only once. The phrase 'various of pictures' is incorrect; 'various pictures' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and should end properly.

× That books had various various of pictures and the.

✓ Those books had various pictures with illustrations.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains redundancy. Correcting the demonstrative adjective to 'Those' for plural 'books', removing repeated 'various', and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× I'm I don't know, but I guess yes, because Chinese have more knowledge about different science than other nationalities, so I think.

✓ I don't know, but I guess yes, because Chinese people have more knowledge about different sciences than other nationalities, so I think so.

The phrase 'I'm I don't know' is incorrect and redundant; 'I don't know' suffices. 'Chinese' as a noun referring to people should be 'Chinese people'. 'Science' is uncountable, but when referring to different branches, 'sciences' (plural) is appropriate. Adding 'so' at the end completes the thought.