Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy like "different various" and incorrect word forms such as "easy, easily". Also, keep your sentences clear and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it has a wide variety of books that help me complete my assignments easily. Moreover, it is a quiet and comfortable place to study.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetitive words like "various and numerous" and by using linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, try to be more specific about what you study or how the library helps you.

예시: Usually, I study in the library because it is quiet and comfortable. Additionally, the library offers many books that assist me with my assignments and practical work, so I prefer it over studying at home.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear sentences. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating phrases like "I can't". Also, try to organize your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not know the way, and my parents did not allow me to go outside. They preferred that I stay at home, play with friends, and eat.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors like "didn't got time". Avoid filler words like "umm" and try to give a more direct and structured response. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese children, but in Nepal, parents are often busy with work and do not have enough time to take their children to the library. Therefore, many children do not visit the library frequently.

× Yes, I often go to the library because there are many different various books available which help me to complete my assignment easy, easily and of course it and of course it is quiet and good place to work and study at the.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because there are many different books available which help me to complete my assignment easily, and of course it is a quiet and good place to work and study.

The phrase 'different various' is redundant; use either 'different' or 'various'. 'Easy' should be 'easily' because it modifies the verb 'complete'. The repeated phrase 'and of course it' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'Quiet' is an adjective describing 'place', so 'a quiet and good place' is correct. The preposition 'at the' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary here.

× Usually I study in the library because it is quiet and comfortable at the same time and also we can find various and numerous books which could help us in our assignment and practical.

✓ Usually I study in the library because it is quiet and comfortable at the same time, and also we can find various books which could help us in our assignments and practical work.

Using both 'various and numerous' is redundant; 'various' alone is sufficient. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. 'Practical' is an adjective; the noun 'work' should be added to clarify meaning.

× No, I haven't gone to the library when I was a kid because as a kid I can't.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because as a kid I couldn't.

The present perfect 'haven't gone' is incorrect with the past time reference 'when I was a kid'; simple past 'didn't go' is appropriate. 'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match the past context.

× I can't walk there because I didn't know the way or I have no idea what library is.

✓ I couldn't walk there because I didn't know the way or I had no idea what a library was.

'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match past context. 'Have no idea' should be past tense 'had no idea'. 'What library is' should be 'what a library was' to be grammatically correct and consistent in past tense.

× And my parents didn't allow me to go outside. They suggest me to stay home, play with friends, eat.

✓ And my parents didn't allow me to go outside. They suggested that I stay home, play with friends, and eat.

'Suggest' should be past tense 'suggested' to match past context. 'Suggest me to' is incorrect; correct form is 'suggested that I' plus base verb. Also, 'and' should be added before 'eat' for proper list structure.

× Umm, I don't know about the Chinese kid, but in Nepal parents are uh, not so free to take their children to the library because they have to go to their workplace and they didn't got time.

✓ Umm, I don't know about Chinese kids, but in Nepal parents are not so free to take their children to the library because they have to go to their workplace and they don't have time.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match general statement. 'Didn't got' is incorrect; correct form is 'don't have' to match present tense context. 'Are uh, not so free' is better as 'are not so free' for clarity.