Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid filler words like 'like'.

예시: Yes, I often go to the school library because it is quiet and has many resources that help me study for my classes and assignments.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear at the beginning. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific about your activities in the library.

예시: I usually use the school library to work on my assignments because it has many books that help me understand my subjects better.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by combining sentences with linking words for better flow. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I wasn't fond of reading, and I didn't have much homework that required me to visit the library.

제안: Your answer is hesitant and contains filler words. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasoning. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think they often go to the library because they have high academic standards and value studying.

× Yes I want I will.

✓ Yes, I want to and I will.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. Adding 'to' after 'want' and connecting the ideas with 'and' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I go to the library in at the school to like study for the class and the for the assignment.

✓ I go to the library at the school to study for the class and for the assignment.

The phrase 'in at the school' is incorrect; 'at the school' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'to like study' is informal and unnecessary; 'to study' is appropriate.

× And most of them are Thai.

✓ Most of the students are Thai.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'students' clarifies the subject, and removing 'And' at the beginning improves sentence flow.

× Most of most of the time I use the library at school for my assignment because it has has so many books that help me understand the subject.

✓ Most of the time, I use the library at school for my assignments because it has so many books that help me understand the subjects.

The phrase 'Most of most of the time' is redundant; 'Most of the time' is correct. Also, 'assignment' should be plural to match the context, and 'subject' should be plural as well.

× No, actually I didn't because I'm not so fond of reading books since when I was young.

✓ No, actually I didn't because I wasn't so fond of reading books when I was young.

The phrase 'I'm not so fond' is present tense, but the sentence refers to the past, so 'I wasn't so fond' is correct. Also, 'since when I was young' is awkward; 'when I was young' suffices.

× And I also didn't have homework for school, so I didn't have to go there.

✓ I also didn't have homework for school, so I didn't have to go there.

Starting the sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary; removing it improves sentence structure.

× I'm Japanese so I don't know much about Chinese kids but but I think I think they do go to library often 'cause they have so much like high standards of like studying and international.

✓ I'm Japanese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I think they do go to the library often because they have high standards for studying and international education.

The sentence has repeated words ('but but', 'I think I think') which should be removed. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the'. 'So much like high standards of like studying and international' is unclear; rephrased for clarity and correctness.