Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки, например, "agenda the library" вместо "go to the library". Постарайтесь использовать более естественные выражения и избегать излишних повторов. Также старайтесь строить предложения короче и яснее, чтобы ответ был более понятным и эффективным.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays most people prefer using online resources. For example, I usually download books on my Kindle and read them in cafes or parks.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и не раскрывает тему. Постарайтесь отвечать более развернуто, используя связующие слова и объясняя причины или детали, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным и естественным.

예시: I usually don't go to the library, but when I do, I like to find quiet places to read or study. However, I mostly prefer reading digital books at home.

제안: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но есть ошибки в грамматике и структуре, например, "Only I did is to get the book". Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для плавности и улучшать грамматическую точность.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library often as a kid because it wasn't popular among my classmates. Also, I didn't like it because it was located in the basement, which was very cold. Usually, I just borrowed books to read at home for a couple of weeks.

제안: Ответ не полностью отвечает на вопрос и содержит неестественные выражения, например, "culture code". Лучше прямо сказать, что вы не уверены, и затем поделиться своим мнением, используя более подходящую лексику и связующие слова.

예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I don't know much about their culture. However, I think Russian kids don't often go to libraries; instead, they prefer reading digital books at home.

× No, I don't and I think most of the people in the in the world don't agenda the library just because we have online resources that we can use on the everyday basis everywhere.

✓ No, I don't and I think most people in the world don't attend the library just because we have online resources that we can use on an everyday basis everywhere.

The phrase 'most of the people in the in the world' is incorrect; 'most people in the world' is more natural and grammatically correct. Also, 'agenda the library' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'attend the library'. 'On the everyday basis' should be 'on an everyday basis' because 'everyday' is an adjective and requires the indefinite article 'an' here.

× You can download them on your Kindle or I book and read them in Cafe, maybe in the public places like parks also.

✓ You can download them on your Kindle or iBook and read them in a cafe, maybe in public places like parks also.

The word 'Cafe' should be preceded by the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Also, 'I book' should be 'iBook' as a proper noun. 'In the public places' should be 'in public places' because 'public places' is a general plural noun and does not require 'the'.

× I didn't do anything in the library because I don't attend it.

✓ I didn't do anything in the library because I don't attend it.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct. The student uses past tense 'didn't do' for past action and present tense 'don't attend' for habitual action, which is appropriate.

× No I didn't because it wasn't popular in through my classmates.

✓ No, I didn't because it wasn't popular among my classmates.

The preposition 'in through' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'among' when referring to a group of people. Also, a comma after 'No' improves clarity.

× Also I didn't like it because it was at the basement and it was very cold place.

✓ Also, I didn't like it because it was in the basement and it was a very cold place.

'At the basement' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the basement' because 'basement' is an enclosed space. Also, 'very cold place' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Only I did is to get the book for the next couple of weeks to read.

✓ The only thing I did was to get the book for the next couple of weeks to read.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure. 'Only I did is' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing.

× I don't know about Chinese kids because I am not very clear with their culture code.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids because I am not very familiar with their culture.

'Not very clear with their culture code' is incorrect usage. The correct expression is 'not very familiar with their culture'. Also, 'culture code' is not a common phrase in this context.

× I only say about Russian kids and I think they don't like libraries.

✓ I can only speak about Russian kids and I think they don't like libraries.

'I only say about' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I can only speak about' or 'I can only talk about'. This clarifies the limitation of knowledge.