Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural by using correct articles and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I seldom go to the library because I'm a busy mother doing household chores, so I prefer browsing on my phone instead." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: I seldom go to the library because I'm a busy mother doing household chores, so I prefer browsing on my phone instead.

제안: Improve your answer by using correct plural forms and adding linking words for coherence. For example, say "When I go to the library, I usually read books and jot down some information in my notebook." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually read books and jot down some information in my notebook.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and clearer linking words. For example, say "When I was a kid, I often visited our school library, but I mostly read books at home." This improves the natural flow and clarity of your answer.

예시: When I was a kid, I often visited our school library, but I mostly read books at home.

제안: Avoid uncertainty and use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say "I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but like other children, they probably enjoy going there to explore and gather information." This makes your answer more natural and grammatically correct.

예시: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but like other children, they probably enjoy going there to explore and gather information.

× I seldom go to library because I'm a busy mother doing some household chores.

✓ I seldom go to the library because I'm a busy mother doing some household chores.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× When I go to the library, usually I read books there and jot down some informations in my notebook.

✓ When I go to the library, usually I read books there and jot down some information in my notebook.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'. Using 'information' without 's' is correct.

× When I was a kid, I really visit our school library.

✓ When I was a kid, I really visited our school library.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'visit' should be in the past tense 'visited' to match the past time frame.

× ...maybe those kids also love going to the library to explore and gathered some informations.

✓ ...maybe those kids also love going to the library to explore and gather some information.

The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'gather' not past tense 'gathered'. Also, 'information' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'informations'.