Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say 'I usually go to the university library during my spare time because it has a wide range of books related to my interests.'

예시: I usually go to the university library during my free time because it has a large collection of books related to my favorite subjects.

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'do multiple things'. For example, say 'In the library, I usually read various useful books and prepare notes to help me study effectively.'

예시: In the library, I usually read different kinds of useful books and prepare notes to help me understand the material better.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. For example, say 'Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I enjoyed reading and my parents encouraged me to spend time there.'

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library because I loved reading and my parents encouraged me to use my free time there.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, and avoid unnecessary information. For example, say 'I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I heard that they spend a lot of time in libraries according to a recent survey.'

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but according to a recent survey, they tend to spend more time in libraries compared to others.

× I usually go to library whenever but whenever I got spare time and during my lectures in a university because my university library is really huge and it's offer a wide range of books according related to my favorite.

✓ I usually go to the library whenever I have spare time and during my lectures at university because my university library is really huge and it offers a wide range of books related to my favorites.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific library known to both speaker and listener. 'In a university' should be 'at university' to indicate attendance. 'It's offer' should be 'it offers' to agree with the singular subject. 'According related to my favorite' is incorrect; it should be 'related to my favorites' to correctly express the relationship and plural form.

× I usually go to library whenever but whenever I got spare time and during my lectures in a university because my university library is really huge and it's offer a wide range of books according related to my favorite.

✓ I usually go to the library whenever I have spare time and during my lectures at university because my university library is really huge and it offers a wide range of books related to my favorites.

The verb 'got' is past tense but the sentence is about habitual actions, so present tense 'have' is appropriate. Also, 'it's offer' should be 'it offers' to match the present tense and singular subject.

× Well, in my library I do multiple things.

✓ Well, in the library I do multiple things.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular library being referred to.

× I love to choose different kinds of books which are really useful for me.

✓ I love to choose different kinds of books that are really useful for me.

While not strictly an article error, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses to improve clarity.

× Then I love to prepare notes to stay connected.

✓ Then I love to prepare notes to stay connected.

No article error here; sentence is correct.

× Back in my childhood I was really interested and in libraries because I I was really good in reading and my parents also prefer me to stay in library whenever I got spare time.

✓ Back in my childhood, I was really interested in libraries because I was really good at reading and my parents also preferred me to stay in the library whenever I had spare time.

'Prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past context. 'Got' should be 'had' for past tense. 'In library' should be 'in the library' with the definite article. 'Good in reading' should be 'good at reading' for correct preposition usage.

× Back in my childhood I was really interested and in libraries because I I was really good in reading and my parents also prefer me to stay in library whenever I got spare time.

✓ Back in my childhood, I was really interested in libraries because I was really good at reading and my parents also preferred me to stay in the library whenever I had spare time.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'good'; it should be 'good at reading'. Also, 'interested and in libraries' is incorrect; 'and' should be removed.

× Back in my childhood I was really interested and in libraries because I I was really good in reading and my parents also prefer me to stay in library whenever I got spare time.

✓ Back in my childhood, I was really interested in libraries because I was really good at reading and my parents also preferred me to stay in the library whenever I had spare time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular library.

× Back in my childhood I was really interested and in libraries because I I was really good in reading and my parents also prefer me to stay in library whenever I got spare time.

✓ Back in my childhood, I was really interested in libraries because I was really good at reading and my parents also preferred me to stay in the library whenever I had spare time.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'interested'; it should be 'interested in'. Also, 'good in reading' should be 'good at reading'.

× Well, basically I'm from Pakistan, I have never into China, so I'm I don't have any proper information about Chinese kids.

✓ Well, basically I'm from Pakistan, I have never been to China, so I don't have any proper information about Chinese kids.

'I have never into China' is incorrect; it should be 'I have never been to China' to correctly use the verb and preposition. Also, 'I'm I don't' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'I don't'.

× But according to the survey of Howards recent survey of Howard, this is that Chinese kids spend spend more of their time in library as compared.

✓ But according to a recent survey by Howard, Chinese kids spend more of their time in the library compared to others.

Repetition of 'spend' is an error. 'Spend' is correct in present tense here as the survey reports current habits. 'In library' should be 'in the library' with the definite article. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.