List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I usually make a shopping list.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because/so/for example). Avoid repeating words and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. I do this because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money, especially when the store has many tempting products.

제안: Answer directly and expand with a clear result. Use a topic sentence then a supporting sentence with a linking word (so/therefore/for example). Avoid asking questions back to the examiner unless asked.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work. It helps me organise tasks by priority, so I finish the most important items first and meet deadlines more reliably.

제안: Provide a direct opinion and give two plausible reasons with linking words (for example/because). Use clearer vocabulary (e.g. ‘prefer spontaneity’, ‘forgetful’, ‘lazy’). Keep it concise and avoid unclear phrases.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer spontaneity and find lists restrictive. For example, they might enjoy deciding tasks as they go or feel lists add pressure.

제안: Give a clear preference first, then support it with a specific, coherent reason using linking words (because/so). Fix unclear expressions and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I rarely lose my phone and it is easy to edit items. For example, I can add or remove tasks quickly and set reminders so I don't forget anything.

× When I went shop I usually Metrolist because that way it's quite use quite useful to saving the money because sometimes I bought a lot of things when I don't I didn't make at least.

✓ When I went shopping I usually used a metro list because that way it was quite useful for saving money, because sometimes I bought a lot of things when I didn't make a list.

Multiple past-tense verbs and verb forms were incorrect or missing. 'Went shop' should be 'went shopping' (verb + -ing). 'Metrolist' is unclear; assumed 'metro list' or 'used a metro list' so 'used' matches past tense. 'It's quite use quite useful to saving the money' is ungrammatical; correct past-tense phrasing is 'it was quite useful for saving money'. 'When I don't I didn't make at least' is confusing; context suggests 'when I didn't make a list'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use gerund for 'shopping', use 'use' -> 'used' in past, use correct preposition 'for saving money', and explicitly 'make a list'. 'Grammar problem type ID:5'

× Every time made a list for my work, because when you make a list, it's quite useful when you do.

✓ I always make a list for my work, because when you make a list it is quite useful.

Sentence used past or omitted subject inconsistently. 'Every time made a list' lacks subject and uses past; the question asks about regular habit so present simple is appropriate: 'I always make a list'. Removed redundant 'when you do'. Suggestion: use subject + present simple to describe habitual actions. 'Grammar problem type ID:6'

× What is your priority when you do the work?

✓ What are your priorities when you do your work?

The original is grammatical but sounds slightly odd; 'priority' vs 'priorities' depends on expected answer. To match natural usage, plural 'priorities' and 'your work' clarifies ownership. Suggestion: use plural for general habits and include possessive pronoun for clarity. 'Grammar problem type ID:26'

× I don't actually, I don't know why because I'm quite like legally do something quite regularly when and also make a list.

✓ I don't actually know why; I quite regularly do things without making a list.

Original contains duplicated negation and misplaced words ('quite like legally' makes no sense). Pronoun and phrase placement is incorrect. I changed structure to a clear subject-verb-object order: 'I quite regularly do things without making a list.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary phrases and place adverbs ('quite regularly') before the main verb. 'Grammar problem type ID:12'

× So maybe they're lazy or they want to do something more like.

✓ So maybe they're lazy or prefer to do things more spontaneously.

'Do something more like' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Replaced with 'prefer to do things more spontaneously' to express a likely reason. Suggestion: use complete comparative expressions or adverbs to clarify meaning. 'Grammar problem type ID:26'

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I go somewhere sometimes I lose the paper.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because when I go somewhere I sometimes lose paper lists.

Minor tense and article issues: use plural 'lists' for general preference; move 'sometimes' for natural adverb placement; 'the paper' is vague—'paper lists' is clearer. Suggestion: use plural for habitual actions and place adverbs close to verbs. 'Grammar problem type ID:6'

× So when I write down on my phone I can't take any time when they're whenever.

✓ So when I write things on my phone I can access them whenever I need to.

'Write down on my phone' should be 'write things on my phone'; 'can't take any time when they're whenever' is nonsensical. Likely meaning is 'can access them whenever'. Also use 'access' instead of 'take'. Suggestion: use correct verb-object collocations and appropriate time expressions like 'whenever I need to'. 'Grammar problem type ID:11'

× So I'm usually use my phone to make a list.

✓ So I usually use my phone to make lists.

Incorrect combination 'I'm usually use' mixes continuous and simple present. Use simple present 'I usually use' for habitual actions and plural 'lists' for generality. Suggestion: avoid combining 'I'm' with verbs that express habitual actions; use simple present with adverbs of frequency. 'Grammar problem type ID:8'