List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition (e.g., "used to" twice). Correct verb forms and negatives ("don’t forget" not "don't fall").

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget the main items. For example, last week I wrote down milk, rice and vegetables, which saved me a second trip to the store.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence, then one clear reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement) and smooth linking words ("also", "moreover"). Avoid fragments. Replace "your" with "my" when speaking about yourself.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritise tasks and save time. For instance, I list three top priorities each morning and usually finish them before lunchtime.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar ("don't like making" not "don't like to making") and give a realistic reason with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases such as "in their dreams."

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to rely on memory and feel mentally organised. For example, a friend of mine rarely writes lists because she remembers appointments and tasks without notes.

제안: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct wording. Use linking words like "because" and avoid awkward phrases such as "provide my phone first." Use correct collocations: "make a list" and "access it on my phone."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me and can access my notes anytime. For example, I use a notes app to tick off tasks while commuting.

× Yes, I used to keep a list when I went for shopping because I used to forgot the main things I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I used to keep a list when I went shopping because I used to forget the main things I wanted to buy.

Mix of past tense forms caused inconsistency. 'used to forgot' is incorrect; after 'used to' the base verb should be used, so 'forget'. Also 'went for shopping' is unnatural; use 'went shopping'. Maintain past tense for 'want' as 'wanted' to match 'used to'. Suggestion: after 'used to' use base verb; keep verbs in same past tense.

× So I always keep a list with me which can help me to don't fall.

✓ So I always keep a list with me which can help me not to forget.

Incorrect use of 'don't' after 'to' and wrong verb 'fall'. After 'help' you can use 'to' + base verb or base verb: 'help me not to forget' or 'help me remember'. 'Don't fall' is wrong in this context. Suggestion: use 'not to forget' or 'remember'.

× Yes, I always make a list for my works because it is very helpful and it saves your time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it is very helpful and it saves time.

'Works' is incorrect when referring to one's tasks; use uncountable 'work'. Also avoid mixing 'your time' when speaking about general benefit; 'saves time' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'work' (uncountable) and 'saves time'.

× Also. Moreover, it can very helpful to organize your work and don't waste your time doing unnecessary things.

✓ Moreover, it can be very helpful to organize your work and prevent wasting time on unnecessary things.

Fragment 'Also.' is incorrect punctuation. Missing verb 'be' after 'can'. 'don't waste your time' should be rephrased as 'prevent wasting time' for parallel structure. Suggestion: include 'be' after modal 'can' and use gerund phrase 'wasting time on'.

× Some people don't like to making lists because they plan their own things in their dreams and they remember easily what they would do and they always organise their thing.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they plan things in their heads and remember easily what they will do, and they always organise their things.

Use 'making' after 'like' without 'to'. 'Plan their own things in their dreams' is unnatural; 'plan things in their heads' or 'in their minds' works. 'Would' is not needed; use 'will' for future intent. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. Suggestion: remove 'to' before gerund, replace awkward preposition phrase, and match plurality.

× I usually prefer making list on my phone because I always keep my phone with me and I can easily access my work by my phone, so I provide my phone first.

✓ I usually prefer making lists on my phone because I always keep my phone with me and I can easily access my work on my phone, so I use my phone first.

'Prefer' can be followed by gerund; 'making list' needs plural 'lists'. Use preposition 'on my phone' not 'by my phone'. 'Provide my phone first' is inappropriate; use 'use my phone first'. Suggestion: pluralise 'list', use correct preposition 'on', and replace 'provide' with 'use'.