List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it's a bit long and has some grammar and cohesion issues. Make your main point in one clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Fix contractions and grammar (e.g. "so as not to forget anything", "I consider myself").

예시: Yes — I always make a shopping list. For example, when I buy groceries I write everything down so I don’t forget essentials; this helps me stay organized because I tend to be forgetful.

제안: Good content and relevance, but grammar and clarity need improvement. Begin with a direct topic sentence (e.g. "I don’t have a job, but I make study lists"). Use correct verb forms and clearer linking (e.g. "so I prioritise tasks to avoid wasting time"). Avoid repetition like "organize my time" twice.

예시: I don’t have a job, but I do make lists when I study. For instance, I prioritise tasks by deadline and difficulty so I don’t waste time and can study more efficiently.

제안: The answer shows personal reflection, but has grammar errors and some vague phrasing. Start with a general reason for others (e.g. "Some people find lists restrictive") then briefly give your own experience. Use correct tense and wording (e.g. "I used not to make lists", "they help reduce stress").

예시: Some people dislike lists because they find them restrictive or time-consuming. Personally, I didn’t make lists before, but as I grew up I realised they help schedule my day and reduce stress.

제안: Clear and natural answer with a good reason, but avoid filler pauses and a sentence fragment at the end. Combine ideas smoothly using linking words (e.g. "because", "so") and correct small errors ("it's more useful").

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me; if a list were on paper, I might leave it at home, so a phone list is more reliable and convenient.

× I always make a list trying to prioritize and some tasks over others to don't waste my time and to organize my time.

✓ I always make a list, trying to prioritize some tasks over others so I don't waste my time and can organize my time.

Errors: 'to don't waste' is incorrect because after 'to' the base form is required; use 'so I don't' or 'so as not to'. Also word order: 'trying to prioritize and some tasks' is awkward. Suggestion: use a participle phrase 'trying to prioritize some tasks over others' and connect purpose with 'so' or 'so that'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, actually, every time that I have to buy something like my groceries, I always make a list so to not forget anything 'cause I would define myself as a forgetful person and I'm not organized at all, so I have to do this.

✓ Yes, actually, every time I have to buy something like groceries, I always make a list so as not to forget anything because I would describe myself as a forgetful person and I'm not organized at all, so I have to do this.

Errors: 'like my groceries' is better as 'like groceries' or 'my groceries' without 'like'; 'so to not forget' uses incorrect structure—use 'so as not to' or 'so I don't'. 'would define myself' is odd; 'describe myself' is more natural. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because'. Pronoun/word choice issues affect clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Oh well, I can't say work because I'm still a student, but every time that I have to study for something I always make a list trying to prioritize and some tasks over others to don't waste my time and to organize my time.

✓ Oh well, I can't say 'work' because I'm still a student, but whenever I have to study for something I always make a list, trying to prioritize some tasks over others so I don't waste my time and can organize my time.

Errors: 'every time that I have' is acceptable but 'whenever I have to study' is more natural. See previous note about 'to don't' being ungrammatical; use 'so I don't'. Adjusted for tense/continuity and clarity. This addresses misuse of infinitive and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I don't know what people doesn't make this list, but in my case I used to don't do them and as I grown up I discovered that making them is really important 'cause it promised you to schedule your day and to limit stress.

✓ I don't know why people don't make these lists, but in my case I didn't use to do them and as I grew up I discovered that making them is really important because it helps you schedule your day and limit stress.

Errors: 'people doesn't' should be 'people don't' (subject-verb agreement). 'used to don't do them' is wrong: correct is 'didn't use to do them' or 'used not to do them'. 'as I grown up' should be 'as I grew up' (past tense). 'it promised you to schedule' is incorrect; use 'it helps you schedule' or 'it allows you to schedule'. Replaced informal ''cause' with 'because' and corrected plural 'lists'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× While the phone you always have it, so it's more. Useful.

✓ You always have your phone with you, so it's more useful.

Errors: Unnecessary article 'the phone' and redundant pronoun 'it' after subject; awkward sentence break and stray period. Correct form: 'You always have your phone with you' or 'While you always have your phone with you, it's more useful.' Remove incorrect punctuation and reorder for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:22