List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to correct grammar mistakes and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I think it controls my spending' and 'buying things that are not necessary'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me control my spending. If I don't have a list, I usually end up buying unnecessary things and spending more than I planned.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve grammar, especially verb forms. For example, say 'it actually helps maximize my efficiency' instead of 'it actually make like maximize my efficiency'. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

예시: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. I keep a small notebook where I write my daily To Do List, and I check it every morning. This method really helps me maximize my efficiency throughout the day.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve word choice. For example, use 'daily routine' instead of 'dairy routine' and 'bound' instead of 'bounded'. Also, try to make sentences more concise and clear.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they don't want to feel restricted in their daily routine. They prefer to stay flexible and free rather than being bound by a To Do List.

제안: Avoid filler words and correct vocabulary mistakes such as 'chick' which should be 'check' or 'cross'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'I feel' instead of 'I feels'.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing them down and crossing off tasks I have completed. This gives me a strong sense of achievement.

× I like making a list because I think it control my spending.

✓ I like making a list because I think it controls my spending.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'controls' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× ...or end up buying thing that is not necessary.

✓ ...or end up buying things that are not necessary.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items, and the verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I mean it actually make like maximize my efficiency.

✓ I mean it actually makes me maximize my efficiency.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and 'me' is needed to complete the meaning. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27).

× I guess those people, they might not want to commit to umm, stuff in their dairy routine.

✓ I guess those people might not want to commit to stuff in their daily routine.

The word 'dairy' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'daily' to describe routine. This is an incorrect use of prepositions/adjectives (ID 11).

× I prefer to make a list on paper umm because I like the feeling of writing down the To Do List as well as the feelings of chick, you know crossed out the list that I have already done.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like the feeling of writing down the To Do List as well as the feeling of checking off the items I have already done.

The word 'chick' is incorrect; it should be 'checking off' or 'crossing off'. Also, 'feelings' should be singular 'feeling' to match the first part. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and adjectives (ID 12 and 13).

× I feels the sense of achievement by doing so.

✓ I feel a sense of achievement by doing so.

The verb 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'the sense' can be 'a sense' to express one of many possible feelings. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement (ID 12 and 27).