List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法和用词错误，如“thoroughfast”不是正确单词，且句子结构较复杂，建议简化句子，避免拼写错误，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, definitely. I am an organized person, so I always make a detailed shopping list before I go to the grocery store. This helps me remember everything I need and shop efficiently.

제안: 回答内容清晰且有逻辑，但句子连接稍显简单，建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意“task 1 by 1”应为“tasks one by one”。

예시: Yes, I do. I find it very efficient because every week before I start working, I make a list of tasks for each day. This way, I can complete the tasks one by one, and it gives me a great sense of accomplishment.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“strand being stopped by the rules”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: I think it depends on people's personalities. For example, I am organized, but some people are more spontaneous and dislike following strict rules, so they prefer not to make lists.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子不够流畅，有重复和断句问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: I used to prefer writing my to-do lists in a notebook, but now, with technology, I usually use my phone because it's more convenient and easy to access.

× I love making lists, so when I go shopping for grocery, I'll definitely make a very thoroughfast and I will pick up everything into my basket according to the list.

✓ I love making lists, so when I go shopping for groceries, I'll definitely make a very thorough list and I will pick up everything into my basket according to the list.

The word 'grocery' should be pluralized to 'groceries' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'thoroughfast' seems to be a typo and should be 'thorough list'. Using correct prepositions and plural forms improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I love making lists, so when I go shopping for grocery, I'll definitely make a very thoroughfast and I will pick up everything into my basket according to the list.

✓ I love making lists, so when I go shopping for groceries, I'll definitely make a very thorough list and I will pick up everything in my basket according to the list.

The phrase 'pick up everything into my basket' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate items placed inside the basket.

× I will make a job list, task list for every day and I feel happy to see that I'm completing the task 1 by 1 and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

✓ I will make a job list and a task list for every day, and I feel happy to see that I'm completing the tasks one by one and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

Adding 'and' between 'job list' and 'task list' clarifies the sentence structure. Also, 'task 1 by 1' should be 'tasks one by one' for correct expression and plural agreement.

× They don't like being strand being stopped by the rules, so they wouldn't like this.

✓ They don't like being stranded or being stopped by the rules, so they wouldn't like this.

The word 'strand' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'stranded'. Also, 'being strand being stopped' is awkward; using 'or' improves clarity.

× I used to prefer writing down a list of things to do in my notebook, but nowadays with the development of technology, I guess it just. I just become more used to using my phones to prepare my agenda and it's more convenient.

✓ I used to prefer writing down a list of things to do in my notebook, but nowadays with the development of technology, I guess I have just become more used to using my phone to prepare my agenda and it's more convenient.

The sentence was incomplete and had awkward phrasing. 'I guess it just.' is incomplete and should be 'I guess I have just become'. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' when referring to one's own device.