List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak daha akıcı ve etkili olması için cümle yapılarınızı geliştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlamalısınız.

예시: Yes, I always make a grocery list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

제안: Cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve anlamı tam olarak iletememişsiniz. Cümlelerinizi tamamlamalı ve bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha net ifade etmelisiniz.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work and prioritize tasks so that I can follow it step by step without getting confused.

제안: Cümleniz yarım kalmış ve son kısmı tamamlanmamış. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamalısınız. Detayları daha spesifik ve tamamlayıcı yapmalısınız.

예시: I think some people avoid making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming, and they prefer spontaneity. However, making lists helps people stay organized and focused, ensuring they don't forget important tasks.

제안: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve tamamlanmamış. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalı, gereksiz tekrarları önlemeli ve düşüncelerinizi net ifade etmelisiniz.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anytime, and unlike paper lists, they are less likely to get lost.

× I prepare grocery shop list and when I go there I know everything I want to buy.

✓ I prepare a grocery shopping list and when I go there I know everything I want to buy.

The phrase 'grocery shop list' is incorrect because it lacks the definite article 'a' and uses 'shop' instead of the gerund form 'shopping' to describe the list. The correct phrase is 'a grocery shopping list.'

× I prioritize everything actually and as I follow the list step by step so that I don't come get confused and I can.

✓ I actually prioritize everything and follow the list step by step so that I don't get confused.

The original sentence is awkward and contains redundant or misplaced words such as 'come get confused' and an incomplete ending 'and I can.' The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical structure by removing unnecessary words and completing the thought.

× However, this help people stay organized and focused so they always know what.

✓ However, this helps people stay organized and focused so they always know what to do.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'this.' Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs an object or complement after 'know what.' Adding 'to do' completes the meaning.

× I would prefer my phone because when I not on my phone I can reach it whenever I want.

✓ I would prefer my phone because when I am not on my phone I can reach it whenever I want.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'when I' to form the correct present continuous negative 'when I am not on my phone.' This is necessary for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× If I would not on a paper maybe I will lose it but I want my I want.

✓ If I do not have it on paper, maybe I will lose it, but I want my list with me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'If I would not on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'If I do not have it on paper.' The phrase 'but I want my I want' is incomplete and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the sentence structure.