List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل وجعل الإجابة أكثر وضوحًا وترابطًا. استخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget many items. My mother advised me to do this, and it helps me remember everything I need.

제안: ركز على استخدام جمل واضحة ومنظمة مع توضيح كيف تساعد القوائم في تنظيم الوقت بشكل أفضل.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because it helps me save time and stay organized, as my mother advised me.

제안: حاول الإجابة مباشرة على السؤال مع تقديم أسباب واضحة ومترابطة لعدم حب بعض الناس لصنع القوائم.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally.

제안: قم بتوضيح تفضيلك بشكل مباشر مع ذكر أسباب محددة تدعم اختيارك بين الورق والهاتف.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I never forget my tasks.

× Yes, I did before because I can't remember many, many things.

✓ Yes, I did before because I couldn't remember many things.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action is in the past, 'can't' should be changed to 'couldn't' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I did it and when I did it I remember and I because my mom told me to do like that.

✓ I did it and when I did it I remembered because my mom told me to do it like that.

The verb 'remember' should be in past tense 'remembered' to match the past context. Also, the phrase 'I because' is incomplete and corrected to 'because' to clarify the sentence.

× Yes I did because my mom give me advice to do like this because an argument the time also and save the time every time.

✓ Yes, I did because my mom gave me advice to do it like this to save time.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past context. The phrase 'an argument the time also' is unclear and removed for clarity. The sentence is simplified to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Many people like to make list because around the time and save the time every day and the time is very important and can.

✓ Many people like to make lists because it helps them save time every day, and time is very important.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make list' should be plural 'make lists'. The phrase 'because around the time' is unclear and replaced with a clearer explanation. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course, because I did it before, because in my phone I cannot forget and every time see my phone.

✓ Yes, of course, because I have done it before, and I cannot forget since I always see my phone.

The phrase 'did it before' is better expressed as 'have done it before' to indicate experience. 'Cannot forget' is present tense and correct here, but the sentence is restructured for clarity and natural flow.