List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然，表达有些重复且不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免冗余。

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I try to remember the items I need, but sometimes I forget a few things.

제안: 回答缺乏条理，表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体理由说明为什么列表对你不太有效。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list for work, but it doesn't always help because I find it hard to follow it step by step.

제안: 表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并举例说明。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because unexpected events can disrupt their plans, making the list useless.

제안: 回答较为简单，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to see everything clearly and I can quickly add or cross out items.

× I always remind myself again and again in my mind and yes I will make a list in my brain.

✓ I always remind myself again and again in my mind, and yes, I make a list in my brain.

这里的时态和表达方式不正确。'will make'表示将来时，但句子描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时'make'。另外，句子中缺少逗号，连接两个并列句时需要逗号。

× Like I have to buy how many things and I won't remember those things.

✓ Like how many things I have to buy, and I won't remember them.

'how many things'前缺少疑问词顺序调整，且'those things'重复，改为'how many things I have to buy'更自然，'those things'改为' them'避免重复。

× Oh, am I really lazy so?

✓ Oh, am I really that lazy?

句子结构不正确，'so'用法错误，应该用'that'来表达程度，且疑问句结构调整为更自然的表达。

× Yes, I have made a list before, but it's not useful and it's not possible for me to do it step by step.

✓ Yes, I have made a list before, but it's not useful and I can't do it step by step.

'it's not possible for me to do it'表达不自然，改为'I can't do it'更符合口语习惯。

× Because sometimes it will make things very terrible like if happen any accidents or something that without your plan.

✓ Because sometimes it can make things very terrible, like if any accidents happen or something unexpected occurs.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语，'if happen any accidents'缺少主语，改为'if any accidents happen'，'something that without your plan'表达不清，改为'something unexpected occurs'更准确。

× I prefer to make this on the paper because it will be clear to know what do you write on the list.

✓ I prefer to make this on paper because it will be clear to know what you write on the list.

'on the paper'中'the'不必要，通常说'on paper'。另外，'what do you write'是疑问句结构，句中应为陈述句，改为'what you write'。