List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, avoid repeating phrases like 'helps to helps to' and use proper sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. I can check off items as I buy them, which saves time and ensures I don't forget anything.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid phrases like 'you are really' which do not fit here. Also, try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because my tasks are simple and few. Therefore, I can complete them without needing a list.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid confusing phrases like 'don't like making lazy'. Use clearer vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are unaware of how lists can help organize their daily tasks. As a result, they don't see the benefits and avoid using them.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your explanation more coherent and complete your sentences properly.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easily accessible anywhere with just a click. Additionally, I can quickly edit the list and check off completed tasks, which helps me stay organized.

× the list helps to helps to make easy while shopping

✓ the list helps to make shopping easy

The phrase 'helps to helps to make easy' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'helps to make shopping easy' where 'make' is the base verb following 'helps to'. Also, 'shopping' is used as a gerund to indicate the activity.

× The item included in the list can be checklisted while shopping and it really saves my time because there is many thing of work

✓ The items included in the list can be checklisted while shopping and it really saves my time because there are many things to do

'Item' should be plural 'items' to match 'included in the list'. 'There is many thing' is incorrect; it should be 'there are many things' because 'things' is plural. Also, 'of work' is awkward; 'to do' is more natural.

× No, you are really

✓ No, you are right

The phrase 'you are really' is incorrect and does not make sense in this context. The correct phrase is 'you are right' to agree with the previous statement.

× I don't have any hefty work and there are some minor work which I can complete it without making a list

✓ I don't have any hefty work and there is some minor work which I can complete without making a list

'Work' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Therefore, 'there are some minor work' is incorrect; it should be 'there is some minor work'. Also, 'which I can complete it' is redundant; 'it' should be removed.

× the main reason why some people don't like making lazy is that they don't have knowledge about the list

✓ the main reason why some people are lazy about making lists is that they don't have knowledge about the list

The phrase 'don't like making lazy' is incorrect. It should be 'are lazy about making lists' to correctly describe the attitude. Also, 'making lists' is the correct phrase.

× they are not worried about how the list work in their day to life and how it helps to organize their work or anything

✓ they are not worried about how the list works in their daily life and how it helps to organize their work or anything

'List' is singular, so the verb should be 'works' not 'work'. 'Day to life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'daily life'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because the main reason is it is accessible anywhere in just a click and I can easily edit a list and make a checklist of a list which org I have finished and which I have left

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the main reason is it is accessible anywhere with just a click and I can easily edit the list and make a checklist of the list showing which items I have finished and which I have left

'In just a click' should be 'with just a click'. 'A list' should be 'the list' to refer to the specific list. 'Which org I have finished' is unclear; it should be 'which items I have finished'. This clarifies the meaning.