List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details logically.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. I include items I need for cooking, such as vegetables and kitchen supplies, especially for breakfast.

제안: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Try to explain how making lists helps you or your wife with work or schedules.

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my wife to help organize her daily schedule. It works well because it helps manage time effectively and keeps everything on track.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Explain reasons logically and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to remember tasks themselves. They believe they can manage their time without writing things down.

제안: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier and more convenient. I can carry it anywhere and quickly add or check items whenever I need.

× Yes, I make the list when I go for shopping from first to end what I have to need for the kitchen staff and for as well to cooking and for as well to vegetables from breakfast from the.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping from start to finish of what I need for the kitchen items, for cooking, and also for vegetables for breakfast.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'the list' should be 'a list' and 'kitchen staff' should be 'kitchen items'. Also, 'for as well to cooking' is incorrect and should be rephrased. The phrase 'from first to end' is better expressed as 'from start to finish'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, yeah, I most of the time I mostly making less for my wife to arrange the schedules time to time and for the day how to go ahead and surely it works very good and it's maintained my time and also management of.

✓ Well, yeah, most of the time I mostly make lists for my wife to arrange the schedules from time to time and for the day on how to go ahead, and surely it works very well and it helps me manage my time and also management.

The phrase 'mostly making less' is incorrect; it should be 'mostly make lists' because 'make' is the correct verb form here. Also, 'works very good' should be 'works very well' because 'well' is the correct adverb. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, it's depend on the people who do not want to have the less their own.

✓ Well, it depends on the people who do not want to have their own list.

The verb 'depend' requires third person singular form 'depends' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'have the less their own' is incorrect; it should be 'have their own list'. This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and clarifies meaning.

× They can maybe manage time with the without making the list, so they can remember all the stuff without making in the list.

✓ They can maybe manage time without making a list, so they can remember all the stuff without making a list.

The phrase 'with the without' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'without'. Also, 'making in the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making a list'. These corrections fix preposition misuse and improve sentence clarity.

× I do prefer to make the list on my phone rather than on a paper because it's quite easy and nowadays it's the modern world, so electronic paper is more easy to write down and to be safe with you, to take with you to everywhere and to buy whatever you want.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's quite easy, and nowadays, in this modern world, electronic notes are easier to write down, keep safe, carry with you everywhere, and buy whatever you want.

The use of 'the list' and 'a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'a list' and 'paper' without an article. Also, 'more easy' should be 'easier'. The phrase 'to be safe with you' is awkward and corrected to 'keep safe'. These corrections address article misuse and improve naturalness and clarity.