List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語にするために、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。例えば、"because if I have a lot of things I have to buy I'm going to miss it"は"because I might forget some items if I don't"のように言い換えられます。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I might forget some items if I don't. This helps me buy everything I need efficiently.

제안: 回答は内容が具体的で良いですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。より自然な表現にするために、文を整理し、接続詞を使って流れを良くしましょう。例えば、"I'm going to make a list of the patient and what I'm going to do"は"I make a list of my patients and the tasks I need to perform"のように言い換えられます。

예시: Yes, I do. As a physician, I see many patients in one day, which can be confusing. Therefore, I make a list of my patients and the tasks I need to perform. This helps me manage my work more efficiently.

제안: 回答は理由を述べていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が多いです。より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。例えば、"making list is time consuming"は"making lists is time-consuming"と修正し、"I need to think about the list before writing down"は"people feel it takes time to organize their thoughts before writing"のように言い換えられます。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. They feel it takes extra effort to organize their thoughts and write everything down, which can seem like a waste of time.

제안: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。より自然で流暢な英語にするために、文を整理し、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。例えば、"whenever or where, wherever I am it's"は"whenever and wherever I am"と簡潔にできます。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because I can create them whenever and wherever I am. It's very convenient and easy to use, so I use my phone often for this purpose.

× Yes I do I usually make a list when I go shopping because if I have a lot of things I have to buy I'm going to miss it So in that case I make a list to shop and to prevent I forgot what I.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually make a list when I go shopping because if I have a lot of things to buy, I'm going to miss some. So in that case, I make a list to shop and to prevent forgetting what I need.

The original sentence has issues with plural forms and sentence structure. 'A lot of things I have to buy' should be 'a lot of things to buy' to correctly express purpose. 'I forgot what I' is incomplete and should be 'forgetting what I need'. Also, adding commas and periods improves clarity.

× Yes, I do, just because I'm working as a physician and I have to see a lot of patient on the same day.

✓ Yes, I do, just because I'm working as a physician and I have to see a lot of patients on the same day.

The word 'patient' should be plural 'patients' because it refers to multiple individuals. This is a singular and plural issue.

× In that case, I'm I'm going to make a list of the patient and what I'm going to do.

✓ In that case, I'm going to make a list of the patients and what I'm going to do.

Again, 'patient' should be plural 'patients' because the speaker refers to multiple patients. Also, the repeated 'I'm' is a redundancy and should be corrected.

× So I think the making list in the work makes my work easier.

✓ So I think making lists at work makes my work easier.

'The making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' (plural) to generalize the activity. Also, 'in the work' should be 'at work' to correctly express the location.

× That's because some people think that making list is time consuming and we need a paper or any smartphone to make a list and then I need to think about the list before writing down and I need to put those information.

✓ That's because some people think that making lists is time-consuming and we need paper or a smartphone to make a list. Then, I need to think about the list before writing it down and I need to put that information.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'A paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Any smartphone' should be 'a smartphone'. 'Those information' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and should be 'that information'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I love to make a list on my smartphone.

✓ I love to make lists on my smartphone.

'A list' can be singular, but in context, making multiple lists is implied, so plural 'lists' is more natural.

× That's because if I use smartphone, I can make a list whenever or where, wherever I am it's And of course a smartphone can make a list easily.

✓ That's because if I use my smartphone, I can make a list whenever and wherever I am. And of course, a smartphone can make a list easily.

'Use smartphone' should be 'use my smartphone' to specify possession. 'Whenever or where, wherever I am it's' is incorrect; it should be 'whenever and wherever I am'. Added commas and periods improve sentence clarity.