List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. For example, instead of repeating 'I have to', you could use linking words to make your answer more natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I cook every Sunday. Without it, I might forget important ingredients and end up in a mess.

제안: Your answer contains useful information but has some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify your points with more precise vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because it involves complex tasks like data collection, training, evaluation, and deployment. Listing these steps helps me stay organised.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words for coherence.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. For instance, students who perform well academically might concentrate better and have a strong ability to memorise information.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct minor grammar errors for clarity.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's portable and always with me. This way, when I go shopping, I can easily check what I need to buy.

× otherwise I will in a mess and forget everything.

✓ otherwise I will be in a mess and forget everything.

The modal verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb 'be' to form the future tense. Omitting 'be' after 'will' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'will be in a mess'. This ensures proper future tense construction.

× my work is about the large language models which is very complex and include several perplexity steps.

✓ my work is about the large language models which are very complex and include several perplexity steps.

The subject 'large language models' is plural, so the verb should be plural as well. 'Which' refers to 'models', so 'is' should be 'are' and 'include' is correct. This ensures subject-verb agreement with plural subjects.

× For example we have to collect data and to train and evaluation and finally to deploy.

✓ For example, we have to collect data, train, evaluate, and finally deploy.

The original sentence has inconsistent verb forms and missing conjunctions. 'Train' and 'evaluate' should be parallel verbs without 'to', and commas should separate the items. This correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× So there are multi steps which I have to list list them.

✓ So there are multiple steps which I have to list.

'Multi' is not used as a quantifier alone; 'multiple' is correct. Also, 'list list them' is redundant; 'list' alone suffices. This correction fixes quantifier usage and redundancy.

× I think it's like just some academic stuff they they never take notes but they have good performance on their academic so maybe they concentrate and has superior memorize ability.

✓ I think it's just some academic people who never take notes but perform well academically, so maybe they concentrate and have superior memory abilities.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Some academic stuff' should be 'some academic people'. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'Has' should be 'have' to agree with 'they'. 'Memorize ability' is incorrect; 'memory abilities' is appropriate. This correction improves pronoun use and clarity.

× Actually, I used to make a list on my phone.

✓ Actually, I usually make a list on my phone.

'Used to' implies a past habit no longer done, but context suggests a current habit. 'Usually' better expresses habitual action. This correction aligns verb tense with intended meaning.

× Since my phone is portable, I can go to everywhere and bring it.

✓ Since my phone is portable, I can go everywhere and bring it.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'everywhere'. 'Go everywhere' is correct. Removing 'to' fixes the prepositional error.

× Especially when I go to buy.

✓ Especially when I go shopping.

'Go to buy' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. This correction uses the proper verb phrase for the activity.

× When I go to supermarket, I can remember what I have to buy.

✓ When I go to the supermarket, I can remember what I have to buy.

The noun 'supermarket' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Adding 'the' corrects the article usage.