List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류와 발음 문제로 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to shop spontaneously. However, sometimes I forget to buy important items because of this.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확히 하며, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously. I find that making plans sometimes limits my creativity.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 정확한 문장 구성을 연습하고, 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without strict plans. For example, they might feel that lists limit their creativity or cause pressure. Personally, I also prefer not to make strict plans.

제안: 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않고, 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 질문에 맞게 답변하고, 이유를 명확하고 간결하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I don't like making lists at all, so I don't prefer either paper or phone for that. I find making lists a bit tiring.

× Actually, I usually don't make a shopping list because my empty I type is P.

✓ Actually, I usually don't make a shopping list because my personality type is P.

The phrase 'my empty I type' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'my personality type' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× It means I prefer to dislike.

✓ It means I prefer to dislike things.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'things' clarifies what is being disliked, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× No no, I dislike St. plants so I sometimes forget to buy important items.

✓ No no, I dislike street plants so I sometimes forget to buy important items.

'St. plants' is an unclear abbreviation. Expanding it to 'street plants' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× Actually I don't make a list for my work if it's my type.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list for my work if it's my type of work.

The phrase 'if it's my type' is incomplete. Adding 'of work' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× So I dislike make plans for something and I just do.

✓ So I dislike making plans for something and I just do it.

The verb 'dislike' should be followed by the gerund form 'making'. Also, 'I just do' is incomplete; adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× I just do anything.

✓ I just do anything I want.

The sentence is vague and incomplete. Adding 'I want' clarifies the meaning and improves the sentence structure.

× Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without strict plans.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without strict plans.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× For example, they might feel that less limit their credibility or makes them feel pressure.

✓ For example, they might feel that lists limit their creativity or make them feel pressured.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. 'Credibility' is likely a mistake for 'creativity'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'lists'. 'Feel pressure' should be 'feel pressured' for correct adjective use.

× Personally, I don't like making plans.

✓ Personally, I don't like making plans.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× Oh no, no, absolutely not.

✓ Oh no, no, absolutely not.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× I don't like to make a list.

✓ I don't like making a list.

After 'like', the gerund form 'making' is more natural and grammatically correct than the infinitive 'to make' in this context.

× It's a little bit, I think it's a little bit tired for me.

✓ It's a little tiring for me.

The phrase 'a little bit tired' is incorrect when describing an activity. The correct adjective is 'tiring' to express that the activity causes tiredness.