List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, definitely. I usually make a list whenever I go shopping, especially in the supermarket because I know that this place has a variety of products. So I think that making a list will be more beneficial for me whenever I choose something to buy.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
No, actually, I don't often make a list for my work because I am considered myself as an organized person and I think that, uh, it's not necessary for me to make a list because I can handle something independent.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think it depends on what the purpose of people. For some people they want to be more organized and saves time whenever they want to do something, so making a list will be more beneficial for them.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Well actually I prefer making a list on my phone to paper because I always bring my phone by my side so it is portable and I can use it anytime.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 85.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn để hiệu quả hơn. Bạn có thể sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, especially at supermarkets because they offer a wide range of products. Therefore, having a list helps me choose items more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và câu dài không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ 'uh' trong bài nói.
예시: No, I usually don't make lists for work because I consider myself organized. I can manage my tasks independently without needing a list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'saves' thay vì 'save'. Bạn nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility. However, others find lists helpful to stay organized and save time when completing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời dài hơn một chút để giải thích rõ hơn lý do.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone is always with me, making it convenient and portable. This way, I can easily add or check items anytime and anywhere.
문법
× No, actually, I don't often make a list for my work because I am considered myself as an organized person and I think that, uh, it's not necessary for me to make a list because I can handle something independent.
✓ No, actually, I don't often make a list for my work because I consider myself an organized person and I think that, uh, it's not necessary for me to make a list because I can handle things independently.
The phrase 'I am considered myself' is incorrect because 'consider' is an active verb and should be used as 'I consider myself'. Also, 'handle something independent' is incorrect; it should be 'handle things independently' to use the correct pronoun and adverb form.
× I think it depends on what the purpose of people.
✓ I think it depends on the purpose of people.
The phrase 'what the purpose of people' is incorrect because 'purpose' is singular and 'people' is plural, causing a mismatch. It should be 'the purpose of people' to correctly express the idea.
× For some people they want to be more organized and saves time whenever they want to do something, so making a list will be more beneficial for them.
✓ For some people, they want to be more organized and save time whenever they want to do something, so making a list will be more beneficial for them.
The verb 'saves' does not agree with the plural subject 'they'. It should be 'save' to match the plural subject.
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