List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to make your response more concise and coherent by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete.

예시: Yes, I usually make lists when I shop because I like to stay organized. For example, I create separate lists for groceries and other shopping needs, which helps me remember everything I need to buy.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then explain why making lists works for you, using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me manage my tasks efficiently. Since I was trained to do this, I find that staying consistent with my lists helps me stay focused and complete my work on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. To improve, express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed when they can't complete all the tasks. Additionally, they may put too many items on the list, which makes it hard to follow and causes stress.

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you can improve by making your sentences more concise and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons for your preference.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more traditional and helps me stay committed. Writing in my notebook or planner allows me to physically check off tasks, which is satisfying and motivating.

× Yes, I usually like to be a very organized person and and while trying to do that I make different lists for my shopping, groceries and my daily To Do List is and I also. Pull up my lists.

✓ Yes, I usually like to be a very organized person, and while trying to do that, I make different lists for my shopping, groceries, and my daily To Do List. I also pull up my lists.

The original sentence contains repeated conjunction 'and and' and improper sentence breaks causing confusion. Correcting the conjunction usage and punctuation improves clarity and sentence flow.

× Yes, they trained me make lists for different tasks throughout the day and it usually works because I like to stay loyal and. Continue doing it so it works for me as a student.

✓ Yes, they trained me to make lists for different tasks throughout the day, and it usually works because I like to stay loyal and continue doing it, so it works for me as a student.

The sentence is missing the infinitive marker 'to' after 'trained me' and has an incorrect sentence break after 'and'. Fixing these issues corrects the sentence structure and improves readability.

× Because their hearts to me and people often feel stressed because they cannot finish all of them and they put too much work on them, so it will be hard to follow the list that they make.

✓ Because their habits are hard for me, and people often feel stressed because they cannot finish all of them and they put too much work on themselves, so it is hard to follow the list that they make.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'their hearts' instead of 'their habits' and misuses the pronoun 'them' when referring to people, which should be 'themselves' for reflexive action. Correcting these pronouns clarifies meaning.

× I like to make my list the old fashioned way and have them on paper because it gives me a more classic vibe and makes me more committed and dedicated to writing on my list and taking off in the paper.

✓ I like to make my list the old fashioned way and have it on paper because it gives me a more classic vibe and makes me more committed and dedicated to writing on my list and crossing off items on the paper.

The phrase 'taking off in the paper' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'crossing off items on the paper'. Also, 'have them on paper' should be 'have it on paper' since 'list' is singular. These corrections improve preposition and pronoun usage.