List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain when you make lists and why.

예시: I sometimes make a list when I shop, especially if I have many things to buy. Usually, I go shopping without a list because I don't want to spend time making one. However, when I have a lot to remember, I find lists very helpful.

제안: Improve your answer by using clearer sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and explain your process more specifically. For example, mention how making lists helps you organize your study time.

예시: I am not working at the moment, but when I was at school, I sometimes made lists of subjects I needed to study. This helped me keep track of my tasks, and I would check them off at the end of the day.

제안: Avoid using informal or negative words like 'lazy' and improve grammar. Provide a more thoughtful reason and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

예시: Some people may not like making lists because they find it time-consuming. For example, I sometimes feel that making lists takes too much time, so I prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Also, clarify your preference with specific reasons.

예시: When I go shopping, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. However, when I study, I write my lists on paper notes because it helps me focus better.

× I do this sometimes but I don't want to waste my time to doing lists and usually I go out without lists but sometimes when I need to do many things and I want to remember everything I am doing least.

✓ I do this sometimes but I don't want to waste my time doing lists and usually I go out without lists but sometimes when I need to do many things and I want to remember everything I am doing list.

The phrase 'waste my time to doing lists' is incorrect because after 'waste my time' the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. The correct form is 'waste my time doing lists'. Also, 'doing least' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; it should be 'doing list' or 'making a list' to convey the intended meaning.

× I'm not working now, but when I go to school I sometimes do lists of subjects I need to learn and I need to study and at the end of the day I click them.

✓ I'm not working now, but when I go to school I sometimes make lists of subjects I need to learn and study and at the end of the day I check them.

The phrase 'do lists' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make lists'. Also, 'click them' is inappropriate in this context; 'check them' is the correct phrase to indicate marking items as done. Using the correct verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think they are lazy to do lists because sometimes I'm like them and sometimes I'm just a girl who don't want to waste time of doing lists and that's all.

✓ I think they are lazy to do lists because sometimes I'm like them and sometimes I'm just a girl who doesn't want to waste time doing lists and that's all.

The relative clause 'who don't want' is incorrect because the subject 'girl' is singular and requires the singular verb form 'doesn't want'. Also, 'waste time of doing lists' should be 'waste time doing lists' without 'of'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× When I go out and I have to buy some things, I prefer to do lists in my phone because it's more comfortable. But when I'm studying and I want subjects what I need to learn, I'm doing it in notes.

✓ When I go out and I have to buy some things, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more comfortable. But when I'm studying and I want to list the subjects I need to learn, I do it in notes.

The phrase 'do lists in my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make lists on my phone'. Also, 'I want subjects what I need to learn' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I want to list the subjects I need to learn'. Additionally, 'I'm doing it in notes' is better as 'I do it in notes' to match the habitual action. Correct pronoun and preposition use improves sentence clarity.