List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question and providing specific details without redundancy. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'my meditation' which may not fit the context.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop. It helps me remember all the groceries and medicines I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, clarify your percentage estimate more naturally.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning for my work, and it helps me stay organized. I would say it is about 80 to 85 percent effective in improving my productivity.

제안: Your answer is vague and incomplete, and the last part is unclear. Try to give a clear opinion with specific reasons and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel confident managing tasks in their heads, while others may find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeated words. Also, clarify the last part about 'reading' or omit it if irrelevant.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me. It also sends reminders, which helps me complete my tasks on time.

× Yes, I do make list list for my shopping and for me it's not about only shopping but also my meditation.

✓ Yes, I do make lists for my shopping and for me it's not only about shopping but also my meditation.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple items or occasions. Using the plural form correctly matches the context of making more than one list.

× So I had to make I have to make the list of my needed groceries and all the things alongside the medicine.

✓ So I have to make a list of my needed groceries and all the things alongside the medicine.

The phrase 'the list' is used incorrectly here; 'a list' is more appropriate because it refers to one of possibly many lists. Also, 'had to make I have to make' is redundant and confusing; 'I have to make' is the correct present tense form.

× Yes, I make a list for my work every morning.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work every morning.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I make a list that I will do in this day and it works very efficiently.

✓ I make a list of tasks that I will do during the day, and it works very efficiently.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Adding 'of tasks' clarifies what the list contains, and 'during the day' is a more natural expression than 'in this day.' Also, connecting the two clauses with a comma and 'and' improves sentence flow.

× From my perspective, it works 80 to 85%.

✓ From my perspective, it works 80 to 85 percent of the time.

The phrase '80 to 85%' is incomplete; specifying 'percent of the time' clarifies the meaning. Also, spelling out 'percent' is more formal and clear in speech.

× It is very efficient to make the least of the work that I.

✓ It is very efficient to make the list of the work that I have.

The word 'least' is incorrect here; it should be 'list.' Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'have' to complete the thought.

× Well, I'm not entirely sure about that, but I think some people are more efficient so that they don't need to do any list and some people I think they are more unorganized and don't know what can be more profitable from the.

✓ Well, I'm not entirely sure about that, but I think some people are more efficient so they don't need to make any lists, and some people, I think, are more unorganized and don't know what can be more profitable from them.

The phrase 'any list' should be plural 'any lists' because it refers to multiple lists. Also, 'do any list' is incorrect; 'make any lists' is the proper collocation. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification at the end.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× Besides it can reminds me from time to time I need to complete the list.

✓ Besides, it can remind me from time to time that I need to complete the list.

The verb 'reminds' should be 'remind' because the subject 'it' is singular and modal verbs or auxiliary verbs are not present here. Also, 'remind' does not take 'from' but rather 'that' to introduce the clause. Adding commas improves readability.

× So from from my perspective my I, I do all the listing on my phone, but in some rare cases for for my reading.

✓ So from my perspective, I do all the listing on my phone, but in some rare cases, I use paper for my reading.

The original sentence has repeated words and unclear phrasing. Removing duplicates and clarifying 'for my reading' as 'I use paper for my reading' improves clarity and correctness.