List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I do. I believe that maintaining a list helps you improve on your thinking skills and also you don't forget things when you're buying something. So I think maintaining a list is actually extremely important and it helps you. I just keep a track of things that you don't forget anything and nothing just slips out of your mind.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Does it work? Yes, I definitely do. I feel that maintaining a list for my work really helps me plan out my day and keep a track of the thing that I need to accomplish by the end of the day. And it really works because it helps me, you know, or keep my day organized and just help me in setting my goals and improving myself for the professionally.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think some people don't prefer making lists because it's just too tiresome and people are generally quite lazy and they feel that they can just keep everything in their mind. They can memorize the task that they need to do so that they can just get them accomplished. But I feel that that is not a great way to look at things because no matter how great your memory is, sometimes things might just slip out of your mind.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Oh, definitely on my phone. I feel when I was a child, I used to maintain lists on paper, but with the advances in technology and also with the fact that everyone now has a laptop and a phone and an iPad, uh, and those are the items that are being used on a day-to-day basis. I feel that, uh, making lists on phone is very convenient because you have it, uh, with you and on you the whole day, every day.
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총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words to make your response more coherent and natural. Avoid repeating the same idea in different words.
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it improves my planning skills and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and informal phrases like 'you know'. Try to use clear linking words and correct grammar to make your answer more effective and professional.
예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently. Consequently, I can set clear goals and improve my professional performance.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 80.0제안: Good explanation with reasons and opinions. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'just' multiple times.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious and believe they can remember tasks mentally. However, I think relying solely on memory is risky since important tasks can easily be forgotten.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is clear but contains many fillers like 'uh' and some redundancy. Try to avoid fillers and be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and maintain fluency.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Unlike paper lists, my phone is always with me, making it easy to check and update tasks anytime.
문법
× I just keep a track of things that you don't forget anything and nothing just slips out of your mind.
✓ I just keep track of things so that you don't forget anything and nothing just slips out of your mind.
The phrase 'keep a track of' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep track of'. Also, 'that you don't forget anything' is better connected with 'so that' to indicate purpose.
× I feel that maintaining a list for my work really helps me plan out my day and keep a track of the thing that I need to accomplish by the end of the day.
✓ I feel that maintaining a list for my work really helps me plan out my day and keep track of the things that I need to accomplish by the end of the day.
Again, 'keep a track of' should be 'keep track of'. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'the things' to match the context of multiple tasks.
× And it really works because it helps me, you know, or keep my day organized and just help me in setting my goals and improving myself for the professionally.
✓ And it really works because it helps me, you know, to keep my day organized and just helps me in setting my goals and improving myself professionally.
The phrase 'or keep' is incorrect; it should be 'to keep'. Also, 'help me in setting' is better as 'helps me in setting' for subject-verb agreement. 'Improving myself for the professionally' is incorrect; 'professionally' alone suffices without 'for the'.
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