List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Ingliz tilida gapirganda, gaplarni qisqa va aniq qilishga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I make a list" deb boshlang va keyin sabablarini aniqroq va to'g'ri grammatikada tushuntiring.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important household items. For example, last week I bought all the groceries I needed by following my list.

제안: Javobingizda gap to'liq emas va grammatik xatolar bor. Savolga to'liq va aniq javob bering, va fikrlaringizni mantiqan bog'lab, to'liq gaplar bilan ifoda eting.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my classes and chores. When I plan properly, I can prepare lessons that suit my students' levels and learning styles.

제안: Javobingizda takrorlanishlar va gap to'liq emas. Gaplarni qisqa, aniq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilib ifoda eting. Mantiqiy bog'lanishni yaxshilang va fikrlaringizni to'liq ifoda eting.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, this can make them feel overwhelmed and stressed when they have many things to do.

제안: Javobingiz yaxshi, lekin yanada tabiiyroq va aniqroq bo'lishi uchun ba'zi so'zlarni almashtiring va gaplarni qisqartiring. Masalan, "kind of papers" o'rniga "any paper" deyishingiz mumkin.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have paper and a pen, I prefer writing my list on paper because it feels more organized. Otherwise, I use my phone to quickly note important tasks for work and home.

× I'm making a list helps me remember all the things that that are necessary to buy and it prevents from forgetting the things that is necessary for household.

✓ Making a list helps me remember all the things that are necessary to buy and it prevents me from forgetting the things that are necessary for the household.

The phrase 'I'm making a list helps me' incorrectly uses the present continuous 'I'm making' as a subject. The gerund form 'Making' should be used as the subject here. Also, 'prevents from forgetting' is missing the object 'me'. Additionally, 'things that is' should be 'things that are' to agree in number. Finally, 'for household' needs the definite article 'the' before 'household'. Suggestions: Use gerund as subject, include the object after 'prevents', ensure subject-verb agreement, and use articles correctly.

× it prevents from forgetting the things that is necessary for household.

✓ it prevents me from forgetting the things that are necessary for the household.

The phrase 'things that is' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'prevents from forgetting' lacks the object 'me'. The phrase should be 'prevents me from forgetting'. Additionally, 'for household' needs the definite article 'the'. Suggestions: Match plural subjects with plural verbs, include the object after 'prevents', and use articles appropriately.

× And for example, last week I went to I went to shopping and shopping to buy some sorts of things to.

✓ For example, last week I went shopping to buy some sorts of things.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced phrases: 'I went to I went to shopping and shopping to' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I went shopping'. The phrase 'some sorts of things to' is incomplete and should end after 'things'. Suggestions: Avoid repetition, use correct verb forms, and complete sentences properly.

× If I make a plan, I never make some things that is appropriate for students level and they are in their learning style so I make a.

✓ If I make a plan, I never make things that are inappropriate for students' level and their learning style, so I make a plan accordingly.

The phrase 'some things that is' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and requires 'are'. Also, 'students level' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'students' level'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it should be completed for clarity. Suggestions: Ensure subject-verb agreement, use possessive forms correctly, and complete sentences fully.

× Some people don't like making lists because they are often disorganized and prefer to keep the things on their mind rather than writing the tasks and plans on writing them down.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are often disorganized and prefer to keep things in their mind rather than writing the tasks and plans down.

The phrase 'keep the things on their mind' should be 'keep things in their mind'. Also, 'rather than writing the tasks and plans on writing them down' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'rather than writing the tasks and plans down'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions with idiomatic expressions and avoid redundancy.

× As a result, they might they might feel overwhelmed or stressed by too many tasks at the time and find it hard to.

✓ As a result, they might feel overwhelmed or stressed by too many tasks at a time and find it hard to cope.

The phrase 'they might they might' is repeated unnecessarily. 'At the time' should be 'at a time' to indicate a general situation. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion, such as 'find it hard to cope'. Suggestions: Avoid repetition, use correct time expressions, and complete sentences.

× If I have a pen and paper with me, I prefer to write the list down on paper because it feels more organized.

✓ If I have a pen and some paper with me, I prefer to write the list down on paper because it feels more organized.

The noun 'paper' is uncountable, so it is better to use 'some paper' to indicate an unspecified amount. This makes the sentence more natural. Suggestions: Use appropriate quantifiers with uncountable nouns.