List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You should improve your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and try to be more specific about how making a list helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy. However, sometimes I also buy new things spontaneously when I see something interesting.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain why or why not you make lists at work. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: Usually, I don't make a list for my work because as an orthopedic surgeon, I handle patient consultations directly and prefer to rely on my memory and experience.

제안: Improve your sentence clarity and grammar. Express your ideas more naturally and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples if possible.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because it depends on their personality. For example, some prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle and feel that lists limit their freedom.

제안: Work on your grammar and pronunciation to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to compare past and present preferences and explain reasons specifically.

예시: In the past, I preferred using paper lists, but nowadays I obviously prefer my cell phone because it's easier to view and mark the items I have bought.

× Yes, of course I prefer make at least because this form I don't forget the important thing I need to buy.

✓ Yes, of course I prefer making a list because this way I don't forget the important things I need to buy.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' when expressing a preference for an action. Also, 'at least' is incorrect here; the intended phrase is likely 'a list'. Additionally, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× But Despite that I I often buy things done with new things.

✓ But despite that, I often buy things along with new things.

The phrase 'done with new things' is incorrect and unclear. 'Despite' should not be capitalized mid-sentence and needs a comma after it. The sentence is corrected to express contrast properly and clarify meaning.

× Usually no depend the situation in my work because I work like an orthopedic surgeon so for the consult with the patients I don't need A at least maybe I prefer unwashed.

✓ Usually no, it depends on the situation in my work because I work as an orthopedic surgeon, so for consultations with patients I don't need a list; maybe I prefer not to use one.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'depend' should be 'depends'; 'like' should be 'as' when referring to a profession; 'consult' should be plural 'consultations'; 'A at least' is incorrect and should be 'a list'; 'unwashed' is incorrect and likely intended as 'not to use one' or 'without a list'.

× I think because the pen depends of the personality of the person.

✓ I think because the plan depends on the personality of the person.

The phrase 'depends of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends on'. Also, 'pen' seems to be a typo for 'plan' or 'pen' is incorrect in context.

× I think many people don't like live with the rules, clear rules or or make to make a list because limit their their lifestyle.

✓ I think many people don't like to live with rules, clear rules, or to make a list because it limits their lifestyle.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to live'. The phrase 'or or make to make a list' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'or to make a list'. Also, 'limit' should be 'limits' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× In the past I preferred I use a paper but never wash it.

✓ In the past, I preferred to use paper but never wrote on it.

The verb 'preferred' should be followed by the infinitive 'to use'. 'Use a paper' is incorrect; 'use paper' is better. 'Never wash it' is incorrect; likely intended 'never wrote on it' or 'never used it'.

× Watched Today obviously I prefer my cell phone because it's easy to to see and and mark what goods I buy.

✓ Today, obviously I prefer my cell phone because it's easy to see and mark what goods I buy.

'Watched Today' is incorrect; likely intended 'Today'. The phrase 'to to' and 'and and' are repeated and should be corrected. The sentence is in present tense and should be clear and concise.