List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing such as "In additional" instead of "In addition". Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. Using linking words like "because" or "so" can improve coherence. Try to use more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to sound more natural.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember all the items I need and prevents me from overspending. This way, I can shop more efficiently and save time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and incomplete thoughts, which affects the coherence and effectiveness. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words and focus on delivering a concise, logical response. Practice speaking slowly and clearly to improve fluency.

예시: Yes, I usually make to-do lists for my work. They help me organize tasks by priority and ensure I don't forget important duties, which improves my productivity.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by hesitations, repetitions, and unclear phrasing. Try to express your points more clearly and use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas. Also, avoid double negatives and incomplete sentences to improve clarity.

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or stressful, especially if they can't complete all their tasks. Others may not know how to create effective lists or have never been taught to use them properly.

제안: Your answer conveys your preference but contains repetitions and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like "because" to explain your reasons more smoothly. Also, be careful with verb forms and plural/singular agreement.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing by hand. Also, paper lists are more accessible since they don't require an internet connection.

× Moreover, I will stay in between my budget without impulse shopping.

✓ Moreover, I try to stay within my budget without impulse shopping.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the sentence describes a habitual action, not a future event. 'Try to stay' is more appropriate to express intention or habit.

× Moreover, I will stay in between my budget without impulse shopping.

✓ Moreover, I try to stay within my budget without impulse shopping.

The phrase 'in between my budget' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'within' to indicate staying inside a limit.

× In additional, I think it makes the whole shopping process not time consuming and more efficient.

✓ In addition, I think it makes the whole shopping process less time consuming and more efficient.

The phrase 'In additional' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In addition'. Also, 'not time consuming' should be 'less time consuming' to express reduction.

× Well, I think making checklist and to do to do lists, organize everything and sort out the the the your wish list and your you and and obligatory lists for you and and and filling them out and it it gives you very, very good.

✓ Well, I think making checklists and to-do lists helps organize everything and sort out your wish list and obligatory lists, and filling them out gives you very good results.

The word 'checklist' should be plural 'checklists' to match 'to-do lists'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and repetitive; it was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Well, I think making checklist and to do to do lists, organize everything and sort out the the the your wish list and your you and and obligatory lists for you and and and filling them out and it it gives you very, very good.

✓ Well, I think making checklists and to-do lists helps organize everything and sort out your wish list and obligatory lists, and filling them out gives you very good results.

The repeated and incorrect use of 'the the the your' is an error; the definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'your wish list' and 'obligatory lists'.

× Well, I think making checklist and to do to do lists, organize everything and sort out the the the your wish list and your you and and obligatory lists for you and and and filling them out and it it gives you very, very good.

✓ Well, I think making checklists and to-do lists helps organize everything and sort out your wish list and obligatory lists, and filling them out gives you very good results.

The sentence contains repeated and misplaced pronouns like 'your you and and'; these were removed for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I think maybe they find making checklists is very time consuming and then or maybe they don't know how to use the the proper checklist.

✓ Well, I think maybe they find making checklists very time consuming, or maybe they don't know how to use the proper checklist.

The conjunctions 'and then or maybe' are redundant and confusing; simplifying to 'or maybe' improves clarity.

× Well, I think maybe they find making checklists is very time consuming and then or maybe they don't know how to use the the proper checklist.

✓ Well, I think maybe they find making checklists very time consuming, or maybe they don't know how to use the proper checklist.

The repeated 'the the' is an error; only one 'the' is needed before 'proper checklist'.

× Or maybe they they they think it is very stressful if you if you do not feel all your tasks and or maybe never nobody ever taught.

✓ Or maybe they think it is very stressful if you do not finish all your tasks, or maybe nobody ever taught them.

Repeated pronouns 'they they they' and unclear phrasing 'if you do not feel all your tasks' were corrected to 'finish all your tasks'. Also, 'never nobody' is a double negative and was corrected to 'nobody'.

× Or maybe they they they think it is very stressful if you if you do not feel all your tasks and or maybe never nobody ever taught.

✓ Or maybe they think it is very stressful if you do not finish all your tasks, or maybe nobody ever taught them.

The sentence lacked a clear subject for 'taught'; adding 'them' clarifies the object of teaching.

× We always prefer paper 'cause I, I want, I like that a tactile feeling when I'm writing down, writing down on the on the paper and, and, and also I think it's make writing down on the paper.

✓ We always prefer paper because I like that tactile feeling when I'm writing down on the paper, and I also think writing on paper is better.

The sentence had repeated pronouns and unclear phrasing; 'I want, I like that a tactile feeling' was simplified to 'I like that tactile feeling'. Also, 'it's make' is incorrect and was corrected.

× and also I think it's make writing down on the paper.

✓ and also I think writing on paper is better.

The phrase 'it's make' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'writing on paper is better' or 'it makes writing on paper better'.

× It doesn't give you that much time and it's more accessible. You don't need to always connect to, to Internet.

✓ It doesn't take that much time and it's more accessible. You don't always need to connect to the Internet.

The phrase 'give you that much time' is incorrect; 'take that much time' is appropriate. Also, 'connect to, to Internet' has repeated prepositions and missing article; corrected to 'connect to the Internet'.