List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
When I shop, because I always go to the shopping mall with my good friends or my boyfriend, I enjoy the time when I talk. If I make a list I will feel very nervous that let me forget.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I make a list for my work. It works because in my daily work I need to make a nice tattoo. What thing is urgent So make a list while my mind. And.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Some people make mistakes, they will feel urgent and nervous.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because the mechanism on my phone can. When I want to check something on my list. And it's very umm.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答不够直接，缺少明确的主题句，表达有些混乱，且语法错误较多。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充理由，避免冗长和语法错误。
예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I enjoy chatting with my friends or boyfriend at the mall. Making a list makes me feel nervous and distracted.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议先明确回答，然后用连词连接具体原因和细节，确保句子完整。
예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I need to prioritize urgent tasks, like designing tattoos. This helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答过于简短且逻辑不清，表达不够自然。建议用更完整的句子解释原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed and nervous when they make mistakes or forget tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答不完整且表达不连贯，缺少具体细节和连词。建议完整表达理由，使用连词连接句子，使回答更自然流畅。
예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily check or edit my list anytime.
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