List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıtlayıp, neden liste yapmadığınızı açıkça belirtin ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy only what I need at the moment. This way, I can shop quickly without worrying about forgetting anything.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Kendi alışkanlıklarınızdan bahsedin ve neden liste yapmanın size yardımcı olduğunu açıkça ifade edin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha tutarlı hale getirin.

예시: Yes, I love making to-do lists because they motivate me. I like to complete tasks step by step, and writing them down helps me stay organized.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam sorunları var. Daha açık ve net ifadeler kullanarak, insanların neden liste yapmayı sevmeyebileceğini açıklayın. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi destekleyici nedenler ekleyin.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurun. Ayrıca, neden kağıt tercih ettiğinizi açıkça belirtin ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

예시: I usually make lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand. Also, I like crossing out tasks when I finish them, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× No, actually I always get the things I wanted and finish the shopping.

✓ No, actually I always get the things I want and finish the shopping.

The verb 'wanted' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'want' should be used instead.

× I don't like the writing or I don't like to use using a. Lists.

✓ I don't like writing or using lists.

The phrase 'to use using a. Lists' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'using lists' without the article 'a' and without 'to use' before 'using'.

× They love making To Do List because they are motivates me and I like doing jobs step by step and I like to writing things on the list before parking.

✓ I love making To Do lists because they motivate me, and I like doing jobs step by step. I also like writing things on the list before starting.

'To Do List' should be plural 'To Do lists' to match general meaning. 'They are motivates me' is incorrect; 'they motivate me' is correct. 'I like to writing' should be 'I like writing'. 'Before parking' is unclear; likely intended 'before starting' or 'before working'.

× They might don't like the writing or they might not like to using list.

✓ They might not like writing or they might not like using lists.

'Might don't' is incorrect; 'might not' is correct. 'To using' is incorrect; it should be 'using'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize.

× I think they would, but there is this is their opinion. I can't say this.

✓ I think they would, but this is their opinion. I can't say for sure.

The phrase 'there is this is their opinion' is ungrammatical and redundant. It should be simplified to 'this is their opinion'. 'I can't say this' is unclear; 'I can't say for sure' is more appropriate.

× I usually make a list on paper because I love writing and I love making lists on the paper because when I finish the work I cross the sentences across the to do sentences.

✓ I usually make a list on paper because I love writing and making lists on paper. When I finish the work, I cross out the items on the to-do list.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general medium. 'Cross the sentences across the to do sentences' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross out the items on the to-do list'.