List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并说明原因。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it boring and prefer to buy things spontaneously.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: No, I don't make lists for my work because I often forget to use them, so they are not helpful for me.

제안: 回答较简单且重复，缺少具体细节。建议丰富内容，说明原因并举例。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming, and they prefer to remember things naturally.

제안: 回答较为自然且表达清晰，但句子结构可以更丰富。建议使用连接词并扩展理由。

예시: If I need to make a list, I prefer to use my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or check it anytime.

× Sorry, when I was sharp I did not make the list because I think that was a boring thing.

✓ Sorry, when I was shopping I did not make a list because I thought that was a boring thing.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词时态应使用过去时。'think' 应改为过去式 'thought'，以保持时态一致。

× Sorry, when I was sharp I did not make the list because I think that was a boring thing.

✓ Sorry, when I was shopping I did not make a list because I thought that was a boring thing.

'the list' 应改为 'a list'，因为这里指的是泛指的购物清单，不是特指某一张清单。

× I do not make a list in my work because if I make the list I was also do not use it, so it's boring and lost.

✓ I do not make a list at work because if I make a list, I also do not use it, so it's boring and I lose it.

句中时态混乱，'was' 应改为 'also do not' 以保持现在时态一致。'in my work' 应改为 'at work'，更符合习惯用法。

× I do not make a list in my work because if I make the list I was also do not use it, so it's boring and lost.

✓ I do not make a list at work because if I make a list, I also do not use it, so it's boring and I lose it.

'the list' 应改为 'a list'，因为这里指的是泛指的清单。

× Because that was so boring, so many people don't want to make the list.

✓ Because that is so boring, many people don't want to make a list.

这里描述的是普遍事实，应使用现在时态 'is'。'so many people' 前的 'so' 多余，应去掉。'the list' 应改为 'a list'，表示泛指。

× Because that was so boring, so many people don't want to make the list.

✓ Because that is so boring, many people don't want to make a list.

'the list' 应改为 'a list'，因为这里指的是泛指的清单。

× If I need to make a list, I prefer to make on the phone because it's easy for me to see.

✓ If I need to make a list, I prefer to make it on the phone because it's easy for me to see.

'make on the phone' 缺少宾语，应加上 'it'。

× If I need to make a list, I prefer to make on the phone because it's easy for me to see.

✓ If I need to make a list, I prefer to make it on the phone because it's easy for me to see.

'on the phone' 是正确的介词短语，表示使用手机。